Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, grammatically correct, and give specific reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and add one or two specific details (e.g., types of sushi, texture, or when you eat it). Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: My favourite food is sushi because I enjoy Japanese cuisine. For example, I often choose salmon nigiri and avocado rolls because I like the fresh taste and soft texture, and eating sushi makes me feel relaxed after a long day.

提案: Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement for past habits, and give specific examples or reasons. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details and a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

例: When I was young, I preferred noodles because they were easy to eat and very tasty. For instance, I often had chicken noodle soup after school, which kept me warm and happy.

提案: Avoid absolute words like 'never' unless you mean it; give a short direct answer followed by a reason and an example. Use linking words (e.g., 'but' or 'however') if mentioning exceptions and be specific about what you eat daily or seasonal changes.

例: Not really; I usually eat similar meals year-round because I have a routine. However, I sometimes add seasonal fruits like watermelon in summer or pumpkin soup in autumn.

提案: Be clear about the change and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether it has changed, explain why with specific details, and use linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'so'). Clarify vague terms such as 'soul food' if used.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved chocolate because I enjoyed sweet treats, but now I prefer savoury dishes like spicy comfort food because I appreciate stronger flavours.

× It make me feel relax and I like it.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and I like it.

Subject 'It' is third person singular so the verb needs an -s: 'make' -> 'makes'. Also 'relax' is a verb; the correct adjective is 'relaxed' to describe a feeling.

× It's like a Japanese girl.

✓ It's like Japanese food.

The student likely tried to compare the sushi to Japanese cuisine, not a person. 'A Japanese girl' is inappropriate here. Use 'Japanese food' for clarity and correct noun choice.

× When I was young I prefer noodle because it's yummy and when I was kids I like soup.

✓ When I was young I preferred noodles because they were yummy, and when I was a kid I liked soup.

The question asks about the past, so use past tense: 'prefer' -> 'preferred', 'like' -> 'liked'. 'Noodle' should be plural 'noodles' (singular/plural agreement). 'When I was kids' is incorrect; use 'when I was a kid'. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'they were yummy' refers to 'noodles'.

× Never, because I like to eat the same food like I eat every day.

✓ Never, because I like to eat the same foods I eat every day.

The sentence discusses a habitual present action, so present simple is fine, but wording is repetitive. Use 'same foods' (plural) and remove the extra 'like' before 'I eat every day' to form a clear comparative structure.

× Yes, it is chocolate because when I was shy I love to eat sweetest food, but now I don't like it, I prefer soul food.

✓ Yes, it was chocolate because when I was shy I loved to eat the sweetest foods, but now I don't like it; I prefer soul food.

Discussing change since childhood requires past tense 'was' and 'loved' for the earlier state. 'Sweetest' needs 'the' and should refer to 'foods' (plural). Use a semicolon or separate clauses to clarify current preference. Maintain tense consistency between past and present.