Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答应更直接并自然表述，避免犹豫用语，并在一句话内给出理由或细节以丰富内容。注意控制在5句以内，使用连接词使表达连贯。例如可以说明喜欢火锅的口味、与朋友家人共享的场合或常吃的食材。

例: My favourite food is hot pot because I enjoy its spicy broth and the variety of ingredients. I usually share it with friends, which makes meals lively, and I like dipping thinly sliced beef and fresh vegetables in the broth.

提案: 回答总体清楚但有重复和犹豫词，应精简并增加具体细节，比如举出最喜欢的糖果或描述吃甜食的频率和场合，使用连接词如 “for example” 或 “because”。句子要更流畅，避免断断续续。

例: As a child I loved sweets, especially chocolate bars and colorful hard candies. For example, after school I often enjoyed a small chocolate, and on birthdays we always had special cakes which made those days memorable.

提案: 回答要更自然并提供原因或例子来支持观点。避免语法错误（如“a people”应为“a person”或 omit），并用连接词例如“because”或“however”来增强逻辑。可以提到具体季节性食物以显示词汇范围。

例: Not really, I tend to eat similar foods throughout the year because I prefer routine and simple meals. However, in winter I sometimes have more hot soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: 回答方向正确但语句不完整且有语法和停顿问题。应完整说明原因并用连接词如 “so” 或 “therefore”。尽量具体说明健康或口味方面改变的细节，避免重复词（如 “it is it has”）。

例: Yes, it has changed. I used to love sugary candies, but now I avoid them because they are unhealthy and too high in sugar, so I prefer fruit or nuts as snacks.

× If I had to choose one, I may choose hot pot.

✓ If I had to choose one, I might choose hot pot.

句中使用虛擬語氣“If I had to choose”時，應搭配表示非真實或不確定可能性的情態動詞“might”而非“may”。“may”更多用於說明現在或未來的允許或較正式的可能性，而“might”更合適表達與虛擬條件句一致的不確定性。建議在類似條件句中用“might”來表達假設情況下的選擇。

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> Student: When I was a child, I really liked the sweets, for example, the candies, the cakes and the chocolate bar.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked sweets, for example, candies, cakes and chocolate bars.

這裡使用過去時“liked”是正確的，但名詞使用上的單複數和冠詞有錯誤。英文中談論類別時不需要定冠詞或不定冠詞，應使用複數形式如“sweets”“candies”“cakes”“chocolate bars”。原句中“The sweets”與“the candies”不自然，且“the chocolate bar”單數與列舉不符。建議列舉多樣食物時使用複數形式且省略不必要的定冠詞。

× Uh, I think it's very special for the occasions, just like birthdays, I still can, I still remember after school, I always eat candy or chocolate.

✓ I think sweets are very special for occasions like birthdays. I still remember that after school I always ate candy or chocolate.

原句結構混亂，包含多個子句連接不當、時態不一致和多餘詞語。建議先將句子拆成兩句，第一句說明糖果在特別場合的重要性，用一般陳述句“sweets are very special for occasions like birthdays”；第二句回憶過去習慣，使用過去時“I still remember that after school I always ate candy or chocolate”。去掉多餘的“can”並修正時態和連接詞會使表達清晰。

× Actually, I'm not. I always eat the similar food day by day. I'm not a people who wants to try something different.

✓ Actually, I'm not. I always eat similar food day by day. I'm not a person who wants to try different things.

句中有代詞與名詞使用錯誤。首先“eat the similar food”中不需要定冠詞“the”，且“similar food”更自然。第二句中“I'm not a people”錯誤，因“people”為複數，應使用單數“person”。此外“wants to try something different”中主語是“person”，須與動詞一致，但句子改為“a person who wants to try different things”更通順。建議注意單複數一致與冠詞用法。

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> Student: Actually, I'm not. I always eat the similar food day by day.

✓ Actually, I don't. I always eat similar food day by day.

回答“Yes/No”問句時，使用否定回答應用助動詞“do/does”而非“be”動詞“am”。原句“I'm not”與問題“Do you eat...”的結構不匹配。應改為“I don't”。同時修正冠詞“the”。建議注意回答句型需與提問的動詞形式對應。

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> Student: Actually, when I was a child, I loved sugar candy, the sweet food, but now I don't like them because I think it's it has too much fat and.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I loved sugary sweets, but now I don't like them because I think they have too much fat.

原句時態部分可接受，但存在名詞形式、代詞指代與多餘詞語問題。“sugar candy”不自然，應用“sugary sweets”或“candies”；“the sweet food”多餘且位置不當。代詞“them”指代複數時前文應為複數。最後“it's it has”為重複錯誤，且“too much fat”應用於複數可直接說“they have too much fat”。建議使用“sugary sweets/candies”並修正代詞與刪除重複片語。