Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., 'is very good taste' → 'tastes great').

例: I really like omelette with rice. It’s quick and easy to make, and I enjoy eggs for breakfast because they’re versatile and filling.

提案: Make the answer grammatical and focused: use a past tense topic sentence, then give a clear reason with one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases.

例: When I was young, I loved eating hamburgers. I liked them because they were fun to eat and I enjoyed the combination of meat and vegetables in one bite.

提案: Use clear grammar and specific examples: explain how your diet changes and give an example of seasonal foods. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly and avoid incomplete endings.

例: Yes, I do. Because seasonal produce varies, I eat more strawberries and salads in summer and root vegetables like carrots and potatoes in winter. For example, I usually buy cheaper, in-season vegetables to save money.

提案: This answer is generally clear; improve by making it more concise and adding a brief explanation or example of how your tastes changed. Use one linking word to show contrast (e.g., 'however' or 'but').

例: Yes, it has. I used to dislike vegetables, but now I eat them every day because I realize they make me feel healthier. For example, I now enjoy steamed broccoli and salads.

× My favorite food is omelette and rice because it is not difficult to cook and I really like to eat eggs and also the omelette and rice is very good taste for me.

✓ My favorite food is an omelette and rice because they are not difficult to cook, I really like to eat eggs, and the omelette and rice taste very good to me.

Original has singular/plural mismatches: 'omelette and rice is' should be 'they are' or 'omelette and rice taste' because two items require plural agreement. Also 'very good taste for me' is unnatural; use 'taste very good to me'. Suggest using plural verbs for compound subjects and simpler phrasing: 'they are not difficult' and 'taste very good to me'.

× I really like to eat hamburgers when I was young because it's the way of eating hamburger is little interesting for me and the I really like to eat vegetables and meat so I can eat.

✓ I really liked to eat hamburgers when I was young because the way of eating hamburgers was a little interesting to me, and I also liked to eat vegetables and meat so I could eat well.

Mix of present and past tenses: 'I really like' should be past 'I really liked' to match 'when I was young'. Also 'it's the way of eating hamburger is little interesting' is ungrammatical and tense wrong; correct to 'the way of eating hamburgers was a little interesting to me'. 'so I can eat' should be past 'so I could eat'. Ensure consistent past tense when describing childhood.

× Yes, I change my food over the year because the vegetables that can buy is varies from season to season so I usually pick up some cheap food for my.

✓ Yes, I change my food over the year because the vegetables that I can buy vary from season to season, so I usually pick up some cheap food for myself.

Problems: missing subject 'I' in 'that I can buy', verb agreement 'is varies' should be 'vary' because 'vegetables' is plural. 'some cheap food for my' uses wrong pronoun; use reflexive 'myself'. These are quantifier/number and pronoun errors; correct plural verb and proper pronoun.

× Yes, my favorite food changed because I didn't like to eat vegetables when I was little, but now I understand the importance of eating vegetables daily and I really like to eat them now.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed because I didn't like to eat vegetables when I was little, but now I understand the importance of eating vegetables daily and I really like them.

When discussing a change from past to present, present perfect 'has changed' is more natural. Also 'I really like to eat them now' is wordy; 'I really like them' suffices. Keep tense consistent: past for childhood, present perfect for change affecting present, present for current preferences.