Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is missing. For this question give a clear topic sentence stating your favourite food, then add one or two specific supporting details (why you like it, how often you eat it, or a memory). Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like “because” or “also.”

例: My favourite food is sushi because I love the combination of fresh fish and vinegared rice. I usually eat it once or twice a month at a local restaurant, and I especially enjoy salmon nigiri. Also, I appreciate how light and healthy it feels compared with heavier meals.

提案: No answer was provided. Start with a topic sentence about what you liked as a child, then give a specific example and a reason or short story to make it personal. Use linking words such as “when,” “because,” or “so.”

例: When I was young I loved macaroni and cheese because it was warm and comforting. My grandmother made it on Sundays, so I associate it with family time and holidays. As a result, the smell still reminds me of home.

提案: There was no response. Answer directly (yes or no) then explain with specific examples of seasonal foods and when you eat them. Use linking phrases like “for example,” “in summer,” or “during winter.”

例: Yes, I do eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer salads and grilled vegetables, while in winter I enjoy hearty stews and roasted root vegetables. This change helps me feel comfortable and makes use of seasonal produce.

提案: No answer was given. Provide a clear statement (yes or no) and then explain with specific reasons and maybe a brief comparison between past and present tastes. Use connectors like “however,” “because,” or “nowadays.”

例: My favourite food has changed since childhood; I used to prefer sweet foods but now I enjoy savory dishes more. For instance, I once loved chocolate pudding, but now I prefer spicy dishes like Thai curry because I appreciate stronger flavours. This change happened gradually as I tried more international cuisines.

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✓ Student: My favourite food is sushi.

The original line is empty and lacks a verb and subject, which makes it a sentence structure error (type 26). Provide a complete response that fits the present simple question 'What is your favourite food?'. Use subject + verb + complement: 'My favourite food is sushi.' Suggestion: always include a subject and verb and answer directly.

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✓ Student: When I was young, I liked noodles and dumplings.

The original line is empty and the question asks about the past ('did you like when you were young?'), so the response must use past tense (type 5). Use the past simple 'liked' to match the question's time reference. Suggestion: for completed past habits or preferences use 'liked' or 'used to like'.

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✓ Student: Yes, I eat lighter foods like salads in summer and heartier dishes like stews in winter.

The original line is empty; the question asks about habitual actions across seasons, so use present simple to describe regular patterns (type 6). Use 'eat' for habitual present and adverbials 'in summer/in winter' to show timing. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and seasonal habits.

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✓ Student: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child; I used to love sweets, but now I prefer savory dishes.

The original line is empty; the question uses 'Has ... changed since you were a child?' which requires present perfect to link past and present (type 6/7 but matches present perfect usage). Use 'has changed' to answer and 'used to' to describe past habit. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes over time and 'used to' for past habits no longer true.