Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify vocabulary and grammar, give a concise topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences. For example, correctly name the dish, state why you like it, and give a specific detail (flavour, texture, or where you first tried it).

例: My favourite food is ramen. I love it because I am a big fan of Japanese cuisine, and the rich broth and springy noodles are very satisfying. For example, I first tried ramen at a small Tokyo restaurant and enjoyed its savoury flavours and varied toppings.

提案: Use past tense consistently, start with a clear topic sentence, and add a linking word when giving a reason or example. Be specific about what made the dish special (ingredients, method, or memory) and keep it concise.

例: When I was young, I liked fried rice. I enjoyed it because it was quick to make and my mother cooked it in a special way with garlic, shrimp and soy sauce. As a result, her version became my favourite because no one else could copy her flavour.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence (yes or no) and then briefly explain with a specific seasonal example using linking words. Correct grammar and word order will make your answer clearer.

例: Not really, but I do try seasonal dishes sometimes. For instance, whenever mala-flavoured foods become popular in Thailand, I try them for a few weeks to see if I like the spicy numbing flavour.

提案: Answer directly and use consistent tense. State the change clearly, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure vocabulary is accurate (e.g., 'spicy', 'vegetables').

例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. Previously I couldn't eat spicy food or many vegetables, but now I enjoy spicy dishes and salads because I gradually learned to appreciate stronger flavours and healthier options.

× My favorite food is lame.

✓ My favorite food is lamb.

The student wrote 'lame' (an adjective meaning boring) instead of the noun 'lamb' (a type of meat). This is a word choice error classified as incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs. Suggestion: check vocabulary and use the noun 'lamb' when naming the food.

× I like lambing because I am a big fan of Japanese cuisine and also I like to eat noodles so that why lambing is a my favorite dish and also I like to find new.

✓ I like lamb because I am a big fan of Japanese cuisine, and I also like to eat noodles. That's why lamb is my favorite dish, and I also like to try new foods.

The student used 'lambing' incorrectly; the verb+ -ing form is not needed when naming a food. Also there are sentence structure and article errors. According to the list, correct the verb+ -ing misuse by using the noun 'lamb'. Break into clearer sentences and use 'try new foods' for clarity.

× When I was young, I like to eat fried rice because it's very easy and my mom can cook fried rice really delicious and unique.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat fried rice because it was easy to make and my mom could cook fried rice really deliciously and uniquely.

The original mixes past context ('When I was young') with present tense 'like'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Also 'it was easy to make' is clearer. Adverb forms 'deliciously' and 'uniquely' should be used to modify the verb 'cook'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use adverbs to describe actions.

× No one can cook fried rice like her, so that why is my favorite.

✓ No one can cook fried rice like her, so that's why it was my favorite.

The clause 'so that why is my favorite' is ungrammatical. In past context use 'that's why it was my favorite' or 'so that's why it was my favorite.' Reorder words to form a correct clause and maintain past tense.

× Not really but sometime I eat food depends on in Thailand they sometimes mala is really popular so I will try it but I will not eat like one year one dish no.

✓ Not really. Sometimes what I eat depends on where I am; in Thailand, mala is very popular, so I will try it, but I don't eat the same dish for a whole year.

Multiple issues: adverb 'sometimes' placement and sentence structure are incorrect. Use 'sometimes' at the start of clause for clarity. 'Depends on in Thailand' is ungrammatical; use 'depends on where I am' and a clear relative clause. Also 'I will not eat like one year one dish no' is fixed to 'I don't eat the same dish for a whole year.' Suggestion: simplify and split into shorter sentences and place adverbs near the verb they modify.

× Yes, I think when I was young I cannot ease something space spicy and also I cannot eat vegetable, but nowaday I can't.

✓ Yes, I think when I was young I couldn't handle very spicy food and I couldn't eat vegetables, but nowadays I can.

The student mixed tenses and used incorrect modal/negation forms. In past context use 'couldn't' rather than 'cannot'. 'Ease something space spicy' is incorrect; replace with 'handle very spicy food'. 'Vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables'. 'Nowaday I can't' contradicts meaning; corrected to 'nowadays I can.' Suggestion: use past tense for past habits and correct collocations like 'handle spicy food.'

× I like to eat with this table so much.

✓ I like to eat at this table so much.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect for location; use 'at' to indicate where you eat. Suggestion: use 'at this table' when referring to dining location.

× I eat a lot of salad and also I can eat spicy.

✓ I eat a lot of salad, and I can also eat spicy food.

'Eat spicy' is missing the noun 'food' and sounds unnatural. Use 'eat spicy food' or 'eat spicy dishes.' Also place 'also' adjacent to the verb it modifies: 'I can also eat...'. Suggestion: include the noun after 'spicy' and position adverbs clearly.