Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give two short, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear descriptions.

例: My favourite food is traditional Uzbek plov. I love it because the rice is cooked with tender meat and fragrant spices, and it reminds me of family gatherings. For example, my grandmother always makes it for holidays, which makes it special.

提案: Answer directly about childhood preferences (use past tense) and give specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition and fillers.

例: When I was young, I liked both Uzbek traditional dishes and Italian food. For instance, I often ate pepperoni pizza and creamy Alfredo pasta because they were quick and tasty, while my family also served traditional soups on weekends.

提案: Give a direct yes/no or short statement, then specify seasonal changes with examples. Use clear verbs and linking words and avoid hesitations.

例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold soups, whereas at the end of the year I often try richer dishes like Turkish kebabs and baklava during celebrations.

提案: Answer clearly using past and present comparison. Start with a topic sentence stating whether it changed, then give specific details about what it was before and what it is now, using linking words like 'when' and 'now'. Avoid long hesitations and unclear references.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. When I was little, I loved the simple stews my grandfather cooked, but now I prefer more diverse dishes like plov and Italian pasta because I enjoy stronger flavours and different textures.

× Uh, my favorite food especially is Uzbek's traditional food because I like it This, uh, this blue, uh, this is blue and this smell and this testing is more flowers and flexible and I think this best foods in my country.

✓ My favorite food is Uzbek traditional food because I like it. It has a unique color and aroma, and the taste is complex and varied. I think these are the best foods in my country.

Problems: incorrect possessive 'Uzbek's' (should use adjective 'Uzbek' to describe food), mixed and unclear noun phrases ('this blue', 'this smell', 'this testing', 'more flowers and flexible'), plural agreement ('best foods' better as 'these are the best foods' or 'the best food'). Suggestion: Use 'Uzbek traditional food' or 'Uzbek cuisine', separate ideas into clear sentences, use precise adjectives (unique, aromatic, complex, varied) and correct subject-verb and plural forms. (Grammar problem type ID: 22)

× I am young at the moment and I am really enjoy uh, Uzbek traditional foods or Italian food, especially pasta or pizza.

✓ I am young at the moment, and I really enjoy Uzbek traditional foods and Italian food, especially pasta and pizza.

Problems: 'I am really enjoy' mixes present continuous 'am' with base verb 'enjoy' — should be simple present 'I really enjoy'. Also use 'and' instead of 'or' if listing likes. Suggestion: Use 'I really enjoy' for habitual likes and use parallel structure when listing foods. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I haven't had time yet, uh, just doing different foods.

✓ I haven't had time yet to try different foods.

Problems: 'just doing different foods' is ungrammatical; need infinitive 'to try' after 'have time'. Suggestion: Use 'haven't had time to try' to express lack of opportunity up to now. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Uh, but I didn't have sometimes, uh, at the end of the year I, I want to, umm, I want to Turkish food, I want testing Turkish food.

✓ But sometimes, at the end of the year, I want to try Turkish food.

Problems: 'I didn't have sometimes' is ungrammatical; 'I want to Turkish food' and 'I want testing' misuse verb forms — need 'want to try Turkish food' (infinitive). Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' correctly, place time phrases appropriately, and use 'want to try' + object. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Uh, yes, changes, uh, since I were chilled, uh, my favorite food food, uh, I am my favorite food. So when I was child, this is my grandfather making old foods, but I don't have my life and then my grandfather and I like my food my.

✓ Yes, it has changed since I was a child. My grandfather used to make traditional dishes, and I liked his food a lot.

Problems: 'since I were chilled' has incorrect verb form 'were' and misspelling 'chilled' for 'child'; use 'since I was a child' and present perfect 'has changed' to show change from past to present. 'This is my grandfather making old foods' should be past habitual 'My grandfather used to make traditional dishes.' Remove unclear clauses 'but I don't have my life and then my grandfather and I like my food my.' Suggestion: Use 'has changed', 'since I was a child', and 'used to' for past habits; keep sentences concise and chronological. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)