Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: พัฒนาด้านความชัดเจนของประโยคและไวยากรณ์ รวมทั้งตอบตรงประเด็นด้วยประโยคหัวข้อหนึ่งประโยคแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดสั้นๆ (ไม่เกิน 3 ประโยคเสริม) ใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเช่น "because", "and", "so" ให้ถูกตำแหน่ง และแก้การใช้คำผิด เช่น "teach" แทน "thank" หรือจัดวางคำขยายให้ถูกต้อง

例: My favourite food is an omelette. I like it because my mother taught me how to make it when I was young. I especially enjoy it with tomato and cheese because the flavours go well together.

提案: แก้คำศัพท์ที่ไม่ชัดเจน (เช่น "mind food" น่าจะเป็น "mild food") และปรับโครงสร้างให้เป็นประโยคที่ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมอย่าง "but" หรือ "however" ให้ถูกตำแหน่ง ระบุตัวอย่างที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องสะกดชื่ออาหาร

例: I preferred mild food when I was young because I couldn't handle very spicy dishes. However, now I can eat mildly spicy meals such as papaya salad or Tom Yum Goong occasionally.

提案: ปรับความชัดเจนของความคิด: คำตอบขัดแย้งกัน (says "Not really" แต่อธิบายว่ารสชาติเปลี่ยนบ่อย) ควรระบุให้ชัดเจนว่ารสชาติเปลี่ยนตามฤดูกาลหรือไม่ ใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง (เช่น "bored" แทน "burned off") และยกตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจงเกี่ยวกับช่วงเวลาในปี

例: Not really; my food choices don't depend on the season. However, my preferences do change often — for example, I might enjoy apples for a few weeks and then get bored of them.

提案: ทำให้ประโยคกระชับขึ้นและแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น tense และคำกริยาช่วย ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดหรือตัวอย่าง สลัดคำซ้ำและปรับคำศัพท์ให้เป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น "pick" → "buy" หรือ "give"

例: My favourite food hasn't changed much. I liked apples as a child because my mother often gave them to me after school, and I still enjoy eating apples now.

× My favorite food is omelette because my mother thank me how to do when I was younger especially when you add tomato and cheese is make me feel good to eat it.

✓ My favorite food is omelettes because my mother taught me how to make them when I was younger; especially when you add tomato and cheese, they make me feel good to eat.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'omelette' should be plural 'omelettes' (or use 'an omelette'). 'thank' is incorrect form; should be past tense 'taught' (Grammar problem type 5: Past tense issue). 'thank me how to do' is wrong structure; use 'taught me how to make'. Use pronouns consistently: 'them' refers to omelettes. 'is make me' is wrong subject-verb agreement and structure; use 'they make me feel good to eat' or better 'they make me feel good when I eat them'. Suggestions: use correct past tense for learned actions, ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents, and keep clause order natural.

× I really like mind food because when I was younger I couldn't handle very spicy food.

✓ I really liked mild food because when I was younger I couldn't handle very spicy food.

Word choice and tense: 'mind' is incorrect; should be 'mild' (adjective meaning not spicy). The sentence discusses past preferences, so past tense 'liked' is more appropriate (Grammar problem type 5: Past tense issue). Suggestion: choose correct adjectives and match verb tense to time frame.

× However, sometime I can eat a bit of spicy food like papaya **** or Tom yam goong in Thailand.

✓ However, sometimes I can eat a bit of spicy food, such as papaya salad or tom yum goong in Thailand.

Adverb and word choice: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency) (Grammar problem type 20: Incorrect adverb placement/choice). Also 'papaya ****' is unclear; likely 'papaya salad'. Maintain correct names 'tom yum goong' or 'tom yum goong'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for occasional actions and use clear food names.

× Not really because my taste changed quickly.

✓ Not really, because my tastes change quickly.

Number and tense: 'taste' as a general preference is usually plural 'tastes' and the student is describing a habitual present tendency, so present simple 'change' is appropriate (Grammar problem type 1: Singular and plural issue; Grammar problem type 6: Present tense issue). Suggestion: use plural for general preferences and present tense for habits.

× For example, if I eat an apple this week, after a few weeks I officially changed my mind how to eat because I get burned off the food every.

✓ For example, if I eat an apple this week, after a few weeks I usually change my mind about eating it because I get tired of the food.

Tense consistency and word choice: 'officially changed' is wrong here; use habitual present 'usually change' to match 'if I eat... this week'. 'changed my mind how to eat' is ungrammatical; use 'change my mind about eating it'. 'get burned off the food every' is incorrect; likely 'get tired of the food' (Grammar problem types 5 and 6: Past and Present tense issues; type 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: keep conditional and habitual tenses consistent and use common expressions like 'get tired of'.

× I think it's not too much change because when I was younger I really like apple because my mother often pick me to eat after school.

✓ I think it hasn't changed much because when I was younger I really liked apples because my mother often picked me up to eat after school.

Tense, number, and verb forms: Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' for change since childhood. 'Like' should be past 'liked'. 'Apple' should be plural 'apples' for general preference. 'Pick me to eat' is incorrect; correct is 'picked me up to eat' or 'took me to eat' (Grammar problem types 5 and 1: Past tense and singular/plural issues; type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/phrases). Suggestion: use present perfect for changes over time, past tense for past habits, and correct verb phrases like 'picked me up'.

× But when I was teenager, right now also I'm really like to eat apple too.

✓ But when I was a teenager, and even now I really like to eat apples too.

Articles, tense and number: 'when I was teenager' needs the article 'a teenage r' and past clause should be connected to present: 'even now I really like...' Use 'apples' plural for general preference. 'I'm really like to eat' is ungrammatical; use 'I really like to eat' (Grammar problem types 22: Article errors; 1: Singular and plural issue; 6: Present tense issue). Suggestion: include articles where needed, keep verb forms correct, and use plural for general foods.

× Then I would like to say it's not changed too much.

✓ So I would say it hasn't changed much.

Tense and structure: 'it's not changed too much' is awkward; use present perfect negative 'it hasn't changed much'. 'Then I would like to say' is wordy; 'So I would say' is more natural (Grammar problem types 5 and 26: Past tense/present perfect and sentence structure errors). Suggestion: prefer concise, natural phrasing and correct present perfect for changes over time.