Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, with relevant reasons. To improve, make the language more natural and concise, correct minor grammar (e.g., "you could decide" → "I can choose"; "wanted" → "want"), and add one specific example to make it more vivid. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

例: I like pasta because it offers many options and is easy to adapt to my mood. For example, on busy days I choose penne with a simple tomato sauce, while on weekends I’ll have spaghetti with a creamy pesto. This variety is why pasta is my favourite.

提案: Your response answers the question and gives reasons, but contains grammar and repetition errors ("I love" present vs past, double "I"), and vague phrase "special oily flavor." Improve by using past tense consistently, correct errors, and add a short specific example of a food you liked. Use a linking word for clarity.

例: When I was young, I loved fried foods because of their crunchy texture and rich flavour. For example, I often ate fried chicken and potato croquettes after school, which I found irresistible.

提案: Good direct answer with reasons. Improve naturalness and grammar: use "a strict diet" not "straight diet," use consistent tense, and avoid wordy phrases like "on each day." Add a brief example of a typical meal and a linking word to connect ideas.

例: No, I don’t. I follow a strict diet to control my weight, so I usually eat similar meals throughout the year. For instance, I typically have grilled chicken, brown rice and steamed vegetables for lunch to balance protein, carbs and fat.

提案: Your answer addresses the question and contrasts past and present preferences. Improve by fixing grammar (use past tense: "I preferred"), avoid fillers like "uh" and colloquial terms like "trash food"—use "junk food" or "unhealthy food." Make sentences more concise and give a specific current favourite and reason.

例: Yes, it has changed a lot. As a child I preferred junk food such as hamburgers and French fries, but now I favour simple, natural dishes like grilled fish with vegetables because they taste better and are healthier.

× My favorite food is pasta because it provides a variety of options.

✓ My favorite food is pasta because it provides a variety of options.

No change needed. Sentence uses present simple appropriately to state a general preference and characteristics.

× You could decide on the toppings, the sauce, the type of pasta you wanted based on the mood of your day.

✓ You can decide on the toppings, the sauce, and the type of pasta you want based on your mood that day.

Original mixes modal 'could' with past form 'wanted', creating tense mismatch. According to the context (general ability), use present modal 'can' and present simple 'want'. Also add 'and' before last item for parallel structure and change 'the mood of your day' to 'your mood that day' for natural phrasing.

× I love all sort of fried food.

✓ I love all sorts of fried food.

Use plural 'sorts' with 'all' for correct collocation: 'all sorts of' indicates various kinds. No tense change required.

× When I was younger I I used to love the crunchy texture of fried food and the special oily flavor in it.

✓ When I was younger, I used to love the crunchy texture of fried food and its distinctive oily flavor.

Remove the duplicated 'I'. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habitual action. Replace 'special' with 'distinctive' for natural phrasing and use 'its' instead of 'in it' for conciseness.

× No, I don't because I follow a straight diet, I'm always on weight control and I tend to eat the same food on each day to make sure I intake essential protein, carbohydrates and fat.

✓ No, I don't, because I follow a strict diet: I'm always controlling my weight and I tend to eat the same foods each day to make sure I get essential protein, carbohydrates, and fat.

'Straight diet' is incorrect; use 'strict diet'. Replace 'I'm always on weight control' with 'I'm always controlling my weight' or 'I'm always on a weight-control plan'. Use plural 'foods' and 'each day' (not 'on each day'). 'Intake' as a verb is awkward; use 'get' or 'consume'. Ensure commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, my favorite food changed actually a lot.

✓ Yes, my favorite food actually changed a lot.

Word order: place 'actually' before 'changed' for natural English. 'Changed' correctly uses past tense to refer to a change since childhood.

× Uh, when I was a kid I prefer trash food like hamburgers or French fries which is much more unhealthy.

✓ When I was a kid, I preferred junk food like hamburgers or French fries, which were much unhealthier.

Referencing the past requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. Use 'junk food' rather than 'trash food'. For the relative clause, match plural 'hamburgers or French fries' with plural verb 'were' and use comparative 'unhealthier'.

× But now I prefer like natural and food cooked in a much more simple way.

✓ But now I prefer natural foods and food cooked in a much simpler way.

Remove filler 'like'. Use plural 'natural foods' to match general preference. Use comparative adverb 'simpler' (not 'more simple'). Keep 'cooked in a much simpler way' for clarity.