Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., "different kinds of food", "whenever I go out with my friends").

例: I’m a big foodie, but my favourite cuisine is Indian food because I love the rich spices and variety of dishes. For example, I often order butter chicken or biryani when I eat out with friends because they are flavorful and satisfying.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use past tense when talking about childhood, give one brief supporting detail or memory, and link sentences clearly. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., "I liked Indian food", "I would always order").

例: When I was young, I liked Indian food a lot because my family cooked it often. For instance, I remember my mother making spicy samosas for special occasions, which I loved.

提案: Be specific about seasonal changes and structure your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then a specific example with linking words. Fix grammar ("different kinds of food", "I remember last month when it was my brother’s birthday, I ordered..."). Avoid unfinished sentences.

例: Yes, I do. I tend to try different cuisines during celebrations or seasons. For example, last month at my brother’s birthday we ordered Italian and Chinese dishes, which was a fun way to enjoy a variety of flavours.

提案: Give a concise direct response and use correct tenses and phrasing. State whether it has changed, give a reason, and add one clear example. Remove fillers and repetition (e.g., say "I don't think my favourite food has changed" and add a specific reason or memory).

例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed; I still prefer Indian cuisine because I grew up eating it and enjoy its spices and variety. For example, even now when I visit a shopping centre I usually choose an Indian restaurant over others.

× Being a foodie person, I love different kind of foods.

✓ Being a foodie, I love different kinds of food.

Use 'foodie' without 'person' (redundant). 'Different' modifies plural 'kinds' and 'food' is uncountable here, so use 'different kinds of food'. This fixes adjective/noun agreement and natural phrasing.

× I love different kind of foods.

✓ I love different kinds of food.

Use 'kinds' (plural) after 'different' and 'food' is typically uncountable; 'different kinds of food' is the correct quantifier structure.

× Uh, Indian food is my favorite food whenever I go to with my friends so that I'm I always prefer Indian food which is very delicious.

✓ Indian food is my favorite, and whenever I go out with my friends I always choose Indian food because it is very delicious.

The original has misplaced adverbial phrases and incorrect structure ('go to with my friends', 'so that I'm I always prefer'). Use simple present for habitual actions ('I always choose'). 'Prefer' is fine but 'choose' reads more natural here. Use 'because' for reason and place clauses in logical order.

× As I mentioned before, when I was young, I like Indian food very much because it is my favorite food.

✓ As I mentioned before, when I was young, I liked Indian food very much because it was my favorite food.

Report past habitual preference: use past tense 'liked' and 'was' to match 'when I was young'. Mixing past 'was' with present 'like' is inconsistent.

× So whenever I go with my friends so that I'm always order uh, Indian food which is very tasty.

✓ So whenever I went out with my friends, I always ordered Indian food because it was very tasty.

Describing past habits requires past tense: 'went' and 'ordered'. Remove redundant 'so that' and use 'because' to explain reason.

× I try different kind of foods at different time of the year.

✓ I try different kinds of food at different times of the year.

Use plural 'kinds' and 'times' after 'different'. 'Food' is uncountable here. This fixes quantifier and number agreement.

× I vividly remember last month it was my brother birthday party.

✓ I vividly remember last month when it was my brother's birthday party.

Add 'when' to connect clauses and use possessive 'brother's' and 'birthday' as fixed phrase. This corrects sentence structure and possessive form.

× So that time I order different kind of food such as Italian, Chinese which was very delighted and tasty.

✓ At that time I ordered different kinds of food, such as Italian and Chinese, which were very delightful and tasty.

Use past tense 'ordered' for past event, plural 'kinds of food', list items separated by 'and', and plural verb 'were' to match plural 'foods'. 'Delightful' rather than 'delighted' for describing food.

× So I think try to different foods are.

✓ So I think trying different foods is enjoyable.

Original is ungrammatical. Use gerund 'trying' as subject and singular verb 'is'. Make the meaning clear by adding 'enjoyable' or similar adjective.

× I don't think my favorite food changed, uh, because when I was child, I like Indian food very much.

✓ I don't think my favorite food has changed, because when I was a child, I liked Indian food very much.

For a situation from past to present, 'has changed' (present perfect) is appropriate. Use 'a child' and past tense 'liked' for past preference.

× So now I also prefer Indian food.

✓ So now I also prefer Indian food.

This sentence is correct in present tense; it expresses current preference. No change needed.

× Uh, for example, uh, whenever I go to shopping centre, so I always prefer to Indian food because it's very tasty.

✓ For example, whenever I go to the shopping centre, I always choose Indian food because it's very tasty.

Use 'go to the shopping centre' with definite article 'the'. Remove unnecessary 'so' and 'to' before 'Indian food'; 'choose' or 'prefer' + noun works without 'to'. This corrects article use and sentence structure.