Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Shorten and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "green curry with chicken," "steamed rice").

例: My favourite food is green curry with chicken, which is very popular in Thailand. I usually eat it with steamed rice because the creamy, spicy sauce and fresh herbs give it a fragrant, balanced flavour.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence about past preferences and use past tense consistently. Be specific about examples and avoid vague phrases like "something like this." Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "for example," "especially").

例: When I was young, I loved spicy food. For example, I often ate chicken curry and papaya salad, which I especially enjoyed because I liked strong, tangy flavours.

提案: Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "wheat noodles" or "cold noodles" instead of unclear phrasing). Use a clear contrast with linking words like "in summer" and "in winter," and avoid typos. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I usually eat lighter dishes, such as sushi and cold noodles, while in winter I prefer heartier meals like stews and roasted meat.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence using correct tense. If you mention an exception or extra detail, explain it briefly and accurately. Avoid unclear phrases like "I always eat sweet." Use one or two precise supporting details.

例: No, my favourite food has not changed; I have liked green curry with chicken since I was a child. Although my tastes have broadened, I still prefer the same dish because of its spicy, creamy flavour.

× My favorite food is green Curry with chicken is very popular in Thailand and I usually eat it with stream steamed rice because the creamy spicy sauce and fresh herbs make it fragrant and delicious.

✓ My favorite food is green curry with chicken; it is very popular in Thailand, and I usually eat it with steamed rice because the creamy, spicy sauce and fresh herbs make it fragrant and delicious.

This sentence contains multiple structure issues: run-on sentence and redundancy. Use a semicolon or split into two clauses to separate the statement about favourite food and the popularity in Thailand. 'stream steamed rice' is incorrect; use 'steamed rice'. Capitalization: 'curry' should be lowercase. Add a comma between 'creamy' and 'spicy' because they are coordinate adjectives. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I recognize that when I was a child.

✓ I remember that when I was a child,

'Recognize' is not appropriate for recalling past memories; 'remember' is the correct verb for past recollection. Also this fragment lacks a main clause; adding a comma implies continuation or attaching it to the next clause. Use 'remember' to match the intended meaning.

× I like spicy food.

✓ I liked spicy food.

The question asks about the past ('when you were young'), so the past tense 'liked' should be used to match the time frame. Using present tense 'like' creates a tense mismatch.

× I like to eat Curry chicken and Curry meat, something like this.

✓ I liked to eat curried chicken and curried meat, things like that.

Time frame requires past tense 'liked'. 'Curry chicken' and 'Curry meat' are awkward; use 'curried chicken'/'curried meat' or 'chicken curry'/'meat curry'. 'Something like this' is informal and unclear; 'things like that' is a better phrase. Adjust capitalization of 'curry'.

× I like spicy, especially papaya salad in Thai.

✓ I liked spicy food, especially Thai papaya salad.

Again change to past tense 'liked' to match 'when you were young'. 'papaya salad in Thai' is incorrect prepositional use; use 'Thai papaya salad' to modify the noun. Also add 'food' after 'spicy' for clarity.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation in spoken-response writing. This is a minor sentence structure/punctuation correction.

× I usually eat lighter foods like sushi and whole noodles in summer and he tear heartier dishes such as stews and roasted meat in winter.

✓ I usually eat lighter foods like sushi and cold noodles in summer and, in the colder months, heartier dishes such as stews and roasted meat in winter.

Several issues: 'whole noodles' is incorrect; likely 'cold noodles'. 'he tear' is garbled; 'I eat' or 'I prefer' is needed. Use 'in the colder months' to clarify seasonal contrast. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and correct word choice.

× Actually not, I guess I like green Curry with chicken since I was a child.

✓ Actually not; I guess I have liked green curry with chicken since I was a child.

Use present perfect 'have liked' to express a continuing preference from past to present ('since I was a child'). Also fix capitalization of 'curry' and use a semicolon to join contrasting clauses. 'Actually not' is acceptable but punctuation improves clarity.

× However when I grow up until now I like the same and I always eat sweet.

✓ However, as I grew up I still liked the same food, and I have always enjoyed sweet flavors.

This sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrases. 'When I grow up until now' is incorrect; use past 'as I grew up' or present perfect for continuity. 'I like the same' is vague; specify 'the same food'. 'I always eat sweet' is ungrammatical; use 'I have always enjoyed sweet flavors' or 'I have always liked sweet foods.' Adjust tenses to be consistent and clarify meaning.