Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要直接且時態一致，建議用一個主題句說明喜好，然後用一到兩句具體細節說明原因和情境。注意語法（時態、人稱）、單詞拼寫和簡潔性，避免重複。可以把情緒與食物的關聯說得更自然。

例: My favourite food is strawberry cake. I usually buy and eat it when I feel down because the sweet taste and light cream cheer me up. For example, after a stressful day at work, a slice of strawberry cake always lifts my mood.

提案: 句子要語法正確並直接回答問題，使用過去時描述童年習慣。避免含糊和錯誤的代詞，提供具體例子或原因並用連接詞使句子流暢。

例: When I was young, I loved sweet foods such as cakes and candies. I remember choosing candy after school because the sugar made me feel excited and energetic, especially on festival days.

提案: 回答已基本正確，但語言不夠簡潔，重複較多。建議使用更自然的表達和連接詞，並給出一兩個具體例子說明不同季節的食物。注意單複數和時態的一致性。

例: Yes, I eat different foods throughout the year. For instance, in spring people often buy fresh strawberries, while in autumn oranges are more common because they are in season and taste better.

提案: 回答要注意時態一致（過去對比現在），並使用正確詞彙（不是 'sweaty' 或 'sweetie'）。說明原因時給出具體例子和簡短比較，避免模糊或矛盾的句子。

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred very sweet treats like candy and chocolate, but now I eat them less because I find them too cloying. Instead, I enjoy more balanced desserts or fresh fruit.

× My favorite food is strawberry cake when I was in low emotion.

✓ My favorite food is strawberry cake when I am feeling down.

句中时态不一致：主句使用一般现在时表示喜好，但从句使用过去时“was”不合适。应使用一般现在时或现在进行时表达当前情绪下的习惯（when I am feeling down）。建议用 am feeling down 或 feel down。

× I will buy it and eat it.

✓ I buy it and eat it.

根据上下文谈论习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时而非将来时。将来时（will）表示将来的动作；这里表达的是通常会做的事，故用 I buy it and eat it 或更自然的 I buy and eat it。

× It can help me feel happy.

✓ It helps me feel happy.

谈论事实或习惯性结果时应使用一般现在时，使用 can 强调能力虽可，但更自然的表达是 It helps me feel happy。若要保留能力含义可改为 It can help me feel happy，但结合前两句统一用一般现在时更好。

× Why was a child I like sweet food like cakes, candies for the young kids, sweets can make their happier.

✓ When I was a child, I liked sweet foods such as cakes and candies because sweets can make children happier.

原句句子结构混乱：时序从句位置不当且有多处语序和连接词问题。应先给出时间状语“When I was a child”，动词用过去式 liked，与复数名词 sweet foods 一致；使用 such as 列举；用 because 说明原因，children 使用正确代词形式，happier 需要比较对象或使用 happier alone 表示更快乐也可，但此处用 happier 更自然。建议理清时间状语、主语与谓语的顺序。

× Yes, I will eat different foods at different times of years, in different times of years, every time have their special foods, like when in the spring people may buy some strawberries and in autumn they will buy some oranges.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. Each season has its special foods; for example, in spring people may buy strawberries, and in autumn they buy oranges.

复数与单数使用不当：短语应为 at different times of the year（或 seasons），不能用 of years。重复表述冗余。每个季节作为单一整体用 Each season 或 every season。人称代词 their 与 seasons 搭配在此句中不自然，改用 has its。时态用一般现在时描述习惯性行为。建议简化句子并使用正确的固定搭配。

× Yes, when I was a child I prefer to to some tasty sweaty food, but now I prefer fewer sweetie because I think it's not delicious.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I preferred to eat tasty sweet foods, but now I prefer fewer sweets because I think they're not very delicious.

时态混用：描述过去的习惯应使用过去时 preferred 而不是现在时 prefer。原句有拼写错误 sweaty（汗的）应为 sweet（甜的）；不定式结构不完整，需补 eat。fewersweets 用法不当，应用 fewer sweets（可数复数）或 less sugar（不可数）。另外 it’s 指代 sweets 不恰当，应使用 they 或 sweets 的复数代词。建议使用一致的过去时描述过去习惯，并注意拼写与可数/不可数名词搭配。

× Then I will try it.

✓ Then I will try it. (If referring to a future action this is fine)

句子本身在语法上可接受：If学生指的是将来会尝试某样东西，使用将来时 will try 是正确的。若想与前句统一为现在习惯，可改为 I try it。提醒根据语境选择时态。