Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement, and avoid redundancy. Add one brief supporting detail (reason or example) using a linking word. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

例: My favourite foods change from time to time, but at the moment I really enjoy Chinese dishes such as Hakka noodles and chow mein because they are flavorful and easy to share with friends.

提案: Use past tense and a complete sentence structure. Provide a short reason or a contrast using a linking word to enrich the answer. Keep it natural and avoid listing without context.

例: When I was young, I liked foods such as pizza, burgers and pasta because they were quick and fun to eat; however, I now prefer more varied and spicier dishes.

提案: Clarify the idea and organize the answer into a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Mention seasons or festivals specifically and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and vague phrases.

例: Yes, I do. For example, during festivals in my country we eat special dishes like sweets and meat-based meals, while in the hot summer months I prefer lighter foods such as salads and fruit to stay cool.

提案: Give a clear yes/no answer and then briefly explain with a specific reason. Use correct tense and natural phrasing, and avoid confusing or incorrect words. Keep it to two sentences at most.

例: No, my favourite foods have not changed much since childhood because I still enjoy many of the same dishes, especially comfort foods like homemade noodles.

× My favorite food are change time to time but this time my favorite food is a Chinese food like Hakka noodles and chow Mein.

✓ My favorite food changes from time to time, but right now my favorite foods are Chinese dishes like Hakka noodles and chow mein.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'My favorite food are' shows a singular/plural mismatch (use 'food' singular with 'changes' or plural 'foods' with 'are'). 'change time to time' is incorrect word order and verb form; use 'changes from time to time'. 'a Chinese food' is unnatural; use 'Chinese dishes' or 'Chinese food', and 'Hakka noodles and chow Mein' capitalization and noun forms should be 'Hakka noodles and chow mein'. Suggestion: decide whether to refer to one favorite food (singular) or several (plural) and match verb forms accordingly, and use correct collocations (dish/dishes, chow mein lowercase 'mein').

× When I was young, my favorite food like pizza, burger and pasta.

✓ When I was young, my favorite foods were pizza, burgers, and pasta.

The sentence omits the past tense verb. 'Like' is present tense and incomplete. Use past tense 'were' to match 'When I was young'. Also correct singular/plural consistency: list items should match: 'burgers' (plural) or 'burger' as a type; 'favorite foods' (plural) fits the list. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to past time frames and ensure noun plurality is consistent when listing multiple items.

× In my my country in many festival and I also different time of year and huge heat and anytime.

✓ In my country, during many festivals and at different times of the year, there is often very hot weather.

The original has misplaced and missing prepositions ('in many festival' should be 'during many festivals'; 'different time of year' needs 'at different times of the year'). It also repeats 'my' and lacks connectors, producing an unclear sentence. 'Huge heat' is unnatural; use 'very hot weather' or 'extreme heat'. Suggestion: use 'during' for events (festivals), 'at' for times of year, and pluralize countable nouns ('festivals', 'times'). Reorder to form a clear clause.

× No, I have not to change my sensor child favorite food because I am not to forget my favorite food.

✓ No, I have not changed my favorite food since childhood because I have not forgotten it.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'have not to change' is incorrect—use present perfect 'have not changed' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. 'sensor child' is likely a miswriting of 'since childhood'. 'Because I am not to forget' is ungrammatical; use 'because I have not forgotten it' or 'because I don't forget it'. Suggestion: use 'since childhood' for time period and present perfect 'have not changed' and 'have not forgotten' to express ongoing states from past to present.