Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите короче и структурированно: начните с чётного топик‑предложения (например, "My favourite food is..."), затем добавьте одно или два конкретных объяснения и пример. Избегайте повторов и ненужных фраз (например, "for myself" несколько раз). Попрактикуйтесь в связках: сначала причина (because), затем пример (for example). Также поправьте грамматику: согласование времен и формы прошедшего/настоящего.

例: My favourite food is the meals I cook myself because I enjoy experimenting with flavours. For example, last week I made a spicy chicken stir‑fry using garlic, ginger and chili, and my family loved it.

提案: Используйте правильные времена и более точную лексику: начните с «When I was younger, I liked...», затем поясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Не повторяйте общие фразы типа "the best tasted food" — лучше сказать "the tastiest" или описать вкус. Старайтесь не уходить в лишние слова и оставаться в пределах 3–4 предложений.

例: When I was younger, I liked cakes the most because my family always celebrated with homemade birthday cakes. For example, my father would buy a chocolate cake every year, and its sweet, rich flavour made it special for me.

提案: Дайте прямой ответ, затем пояснение с конкретикой и связками. Избегайте повторов ("traditional food like traditional foods like") и заполнителей (uh). Уточните названия блюд и их сезонность, если возможно. Проверьте порядок слов и артикли. Постарайтесь 2–3 связных предложения без лишних повторов.

例: No, I don't usually change what I eat throughout the year because my family prefers homemade traditional dishes. For instance, my mother cooks Bismarck and Palau Kaza regularly, so we eat these meals all year round.

提案: Начните с ясного утверждения: "Yes, it has." Затем объясните, как именно изменились предпочтения, используя связки (because, for example). Избегайте разговорных вставок (umm, uh) и повторов. Уточните частоту и причину изменения вкуса — это сделает ответ более содержательным и естественным.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood because I now enjoy spicier flavours. For example, I often eat spicy ramen several times a week because I like the bold broth and chilli heat.

× My favorite food is the food that I make for myself because I think I cook very well and my cooking skills are so good.

✓ My favorite food is the food that I make for myself because I think I cook very well and my cooking skills are good.

The phrase 'are so good' is informal and repetitive; change to 'are good' for concise, natural present-tense description. Use present simple to describe general ability. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary intensifiers like 'so' unless emphasizing.

× So I like to cook when I cooked it for myself, when I made it with laugh with all the skills that I've got for only myself.

✓ So I like to cook when I cook for myself, when I make it using all the skills that I have for myself.

Mixed tenses: 'cooked' and 'made' are past forms but the sentence expresses a habitual present preference. Use present simple 'cook' and 'make'. Also replace 'I've got' with 'I have' and correct word order; remove 'with laugh' which is unclear.

× And that's the reason that I like the food that I made.

✓ And that's the reason I like the food that I make.

The student uses past tense 'made' but is describing a general preference now. Use present simple 'make' to match habitual meaning.

× When I was younger, I like to eat cakes.

✓ When I was younger, I liked to eat cakes.

Time marker 'When I was younger' requires past tense. Change present 'like' to past 'liked'.

× For example, my father bought birthday cake and my birthday, so it was my present and it was the best tasted food of all my life.

✓ For example, for my birthday my father bought me a birthday cake, so it was my present and it tasted the best of my life.

Word order and article use are incorrect. Use 'for my birthday' and 'bought me a birthday cake'. 'Best tasted food' is ungrammatical; use 'it tasted the best' or 'the best I have ever tasted'. Keep past tense consistent.

× So I think that's the reason that it makes cakes more special for me.

✓ So I think that's the reason cakes are more special to me.

Incorrect subject and verb 'it makes cakes' — unclear pronoun. Use 'cakes are more special to me' for clarity and correct structure.

× No, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ No, I don't eat different foods at different times of the year.

This sentence is correct in present simple to describe habitual action; no grammatical change needed.

× I always eat traditional food like traditional foods like Bismarck, Palau Kaza and every day and every week my mother cooks at home, uh, cooks at home.

✓ I always eat traditional foods like Bismarck and Palau Kaza, and my mother cooks at home every day and every week.

Redundant 'traditional food like traditional foods like' and incorrect word order. Use plural 'foods' and list examples clearly. Place time expressions 'every day' after the clause. Remove filler repetition.

× So I like my, I like the homemade, uh, food of my mother.

✓ So I like my mother's homemade food.

Use possessive 'my mother's' instead of 'the homemade food of my mother' for natural English; remove filler pauses.

× So that's the reason that I don't eat different time.

✓ So that's the reason I don't eat different foods at different times.

Original is ungrammatical: 'don't eat different time' lacks noun and plural. Use 'different foods at different times' to match meaning.

× Yep, in my opinion I am my favorite food change since I was since I was a child.

✓ Yes, in my opinion my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to describe change from past to present. Remove extra words 'I am' and duplicate 'since I was'.

× Now I like more spicy foods, for example ramen.

✓ Now I like spicier foods, for example, ramen.

Comparative form 'spicier' is needed when comparing past and present preferences. 'Like more spicy foods' is awkward; use 'spicier foods'.

× I usually uh, eat ramen every day that's the most favorite food umm because it tastes just delicious and it's so spicy that I cannot stop eating eating it.

✓ I usually eat ramen every day; it's my favorite food because it tastes delicious and it's so spicy that I cannot stop eating it.

Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'eating'. 'Most favorite' is incorrect — use 'my favorite'. Use semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. Keep present simple 'eat ramen' for habitual action.