Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Отвечайте более грамотно и компактно: начните с прямого предложения о любимой еде, затем добавьте 1–2 причины с логическими связками. Избегайте дословного перевода с родного языка и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, «I really like fish», «it is delicious and healthy»). Максимум 3–4 предложения.

例: My favourite food is sushi rolls because I really like fish. They are delicious and healthy, and I enjoy the variety of flavours and textures. I often eat them with soy sauce and wasabi.

提案: Дайте чёткий ответ в прошедшем времени и добавьте одну причину или краткий пример. Избегайте неопределённых фраз («I didn't remember»), используйте «I don’t remember exactly» или прямо ответьте. Следите за порядком слов и артиклями (например, «a basic food»).

例: I don’t remember exactly, but I used to like potatoes with sausage when I was a child. It was a simple and filling meal that my parents often cooked for me.

提案: Дайте конкретный ответ и подкрепите его примером с сезоном или праздником. Избегайте неопределённости («probably yeah») и используйте связки для логики («for example», «in summer/winter»). Максимум 2–3 предложения.

例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer salads and cold dishes, while in winter I like hot soups and stews.

提案: Отвечайте ясно и логично: сначала «Yes» or «No», затем объяснение изменения с причинами. Избегайте непонятных фраз («social roles») и ошибок в времени и словоупотреблении. Постройте 2–3 предложения, используя связки («because», «when», «now»).

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was a child I disliked fish, but now I love sushi and other fish dishes because I appreciate the flavour and health benefits.

× I like sushi rolls because I very like fish.

✓ I like sushi rolls because I really like fish.

The student used 'very like', which is not a correct English collocation. In English, 'very' modifies adjectives or adverbs (e.g., 'very good'), but not the verb 'like'. Use 'really' or 'really enjoy' to modify the verb. Suggestion: replace 'very like' with 'really like' or 'enjoy a lot'.

× This delicious food and healthy.

✓ They are delicious and healthy.

The original fragment lacks a proper subject and verb and mixes singular/plural. 'Sushi rolls' is plural, so use 'they are'. Also use adjectives 'delicious' and 'healthy' to describe them. Suggestion: form a complete sentence with subject + verb + adjectives.

× I didn't remember but I think potato with sausage because this basic food for a child.

✓ I don't remember, but I think potatoes with sausage because it was a basic food for a child.

Mixed tenses and number errors: 'didn't remember' is awkward for a general present lack of memory; 'don't remember' is more natural. 'Potato' should be plural 'potatoes' when speaking generally, and 'this basic food' needs subject-verb agreement and past reference: use 'it was a basic food'. Suggestion: use consistent tense and correct plural forms.

× Yes, I like different food and probably yeah.

✓ Yes, I like different foods, probably.

Use plural 'foods' when referring to different kinds of food. 'Probably yeah' is informal and redundant; place 'probably' before the pause or at end politely as 'probably'. Suggestion: say 'I like different foods, probably.' or 'Yes, I like different kinds of food.'

× Yes, of course, when I was a child I hate social roles, but now are you very love this food because I love like fish.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I hated sushi rolls, but now I really love this food because I like fish.

Multiple errors: tense inconsistency ('was a child' requires past tense 'hated'), incorrect phrase 'hate social roles' seems intended as 'hated sushi rolls' or similar; word order 'are you very love' is ungrammatical. Use 'really love' to express strong present liking and 'like fish' is fine. Suggestion: keep past for childhood dislike ('hated') and simple present for current feeling ('I really love').