Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use correct names of dishes and simple linking words.

例: My favourite food is Punjabi cuisine, especially makki ki roti and sarson da saag. I like it because the flavours are rich and spicy, and it reminds me of family meals at home.

提案: Answer directly with past tense and reduce repetition. Give a short reason and one specific example. Use linking words such as “because” or “so”.

例: When I was young, I liked spicy street food, such as Hakka noodles and fried momos, because they tasted bold and were easy to share with friends.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain differences with specific examples and linking words (e.g., “in summer… whereas in winter…”). Keep sentences short and grammatical.

例: Yes. In summer I prefer light, cooling foods like salads and yogurt, whereas in winter I eat heavier dishes such as lentil stews and rice to keep warm.

提案: Use past and present contrast clearly. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then explain how tastes have changed with one or two clear reasons and examples. Avoid unclear words and repetition.

例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred very spicy foods, but now I enjoy lighter, milder dishes like grilled fish and steamed vegetables because I care more about health.

× My favorite food is of food racing and the rabbit hole like Maki Ki Roti and Sarasota Saag.

✓ My favorite foods are Maki ki Roti and Sarson ka Saag; I also really like Punjabi food.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and noun phrases ('is of food racing', 'the rabbit hole') and article use. Also 'favorite food' should match plural when listing multiple foods. Use plural 'foods' and list items clearly with 'are' to agree with plural subject. Replace garbled phrases with the likely intended dish names and use a semicolon or conjunction to link the statement about Punjabi food. Suggestion: Keep items clear and parallel: 'My favorite foods are X and Y.'

× When I was I was young, I like like spicy more spicy foods like Hakka noodles or momo Sir and fry momos.

✓ When I was young, I liked spicy foods such as Hakka noodles and fried momos.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and repeats words ('I was I was', 'like like', 'more spicy'). The speaking context asks about childhood, so past tense 'liked' is required. Correct repetitive words, use 'such as' to give examples, and 'fried momos' is the correct adjective form. Also remove unnecessary address 'Sir'. Suggestion: Use past tense when referring to childhood: 'When I was young, I liked...'.

× Yes, I eat different foods at the different times of the group because in summers I like it too like food and in the winter I like I prefer to eat some heavy foods.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year: in summer I prefer lighter foods, and in winter I prefer heavier foods.

The original has incorrect articles ('the different times', 'the group'), wrong time expressions ('in summers'), awkward phrasing ('I like it too like food'), and mixed preferences. Use 'different times of the year' or 'at different times of the year' without 'the' before 'different'. Use singular 'summer' and 'winter' for seasonal habits and contrast 'lighter' vs 'heavier' foods with 'prefer'. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure when comparing seasons: 'in summer I prefer X, and in winter I prefer Y.'

× When I was held my favorite food always like spicy foods and and since then I like lighter lightly and. Less selfie.

✓ When I was a child my favorite foods were always spicy, but since then I have preferred lighter foods and eat less spicy food.

The original contains incorrect verb forms ('was held'), wrong tense and aspect, repetitions ('and and'), and unclear phrases ('lightly', 'Less selfie'). Use past simple 'were' for past habitual preference and present perfect 'have preferred' to show change continuing to present. Replace unclear words with 'less spicy' or 'lighter foods'. Suggestion: Use clear contrasting conjunctions ('but since then') and correct tense to show change from past to present.