Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, cách dùng thì và danh từ (ví dụ: "remind" → "reminds", "every in Sundays" → "every Sunday"). Tránh thông tin mâu thuẫn và từ không rõ (ví dụ: "Tuesday morning" mâu với "every Sunday"; "go ****" không rõ ý). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể liên quan đến cảm xúc hoặc kỷ niệm, dùng từ nối đơn giản như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

例: My favourite food is banh mi because it reminds me of family gatherings. We have it every Sunday, and I enjoy chatting with my parents while we eat. Those moments make me feel warm and nostalgic.

提案: Cần sửa lỗi thì và động từ ("love" → "loved"). Tránh từ sai nghĩa và lỗi chính tả ("hate give", "sentation"); dùng từ chính xác như "sensation" hoặc "feeling". Nên nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể (gì bạn thích, ví dụ món ăn nào, tại sao). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối lý do.

例: When I was young, I loved spicy food. I especially enjoyed dishes with chili peppers, such as spicy noodles, because the heat gave me an exciting, tingling sensation.

提案: Cần rõ ràng và chính xác: sửa lỗi từ vựng ("seasonals", "toys", "shoes" đều sai ngữ cảnh). Tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai ("prefer like", "cold drink"). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề đơn giản, rồi nêu 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể theo mùa, dùng liên từ như "for example" hoặc "for instance" và từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "seasonal fruits", "hot soups").

例: Yes, I do. I eat seasonal foods depending on the weather. For instance, in summer I prefer refreshing salads and cold drinks, while in winter I like hot soups and spicy dishes to keep me warm.

提案: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và từ sai ("choose", "rituals", "lightened"). Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason), sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết về cách khẩu vị thay đổi theo mùa hay thói quen ăn uống. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "changed", "preferences", "lighter meals", "healthier food" và kết hợp liên từ như "but" hoặc "however".

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child because I still enjoy the same dishes. However, my preferences have shifted slightly: I tend to eat lighter meals in summer and choose healthier options in winter.

× My favorite food is banh MI.

✓ My favorite food is banh mi.

Use lowercase for common nouns; 'banh mi' is a common noun and should not be capitalized as 'MI'.

× It's remind me of my family gathering because we have this every in Sundays.

✓ It reminds me of family gatherings because we have it every Sunday.

Use 'reminds' (third person singular present) not 'remind'; 'family gathering' should be plural if recurring; use 'it' to refer to the food; 'every Sunday' is correct phrase. Improve sentence clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× I really miss Tuesday morning when I go **** and chatting with my parents while we ate together.

✓ I really miss Tuesday mornings when I would go out and chat with my parents while we ate together.

Use plural 'Tuesday mornings' for repeated events; 'would go' or 'used to go' expresses past habitual action; replace 'chatting' with 'chat' to match parallel structure; 'ate' is acceptable as past tense but 'we ate together' aligns with habitual past, so 'would eat together' could also be used.

× When I was young, I love spicy food.

✓ When I was young, I loved spicy food.

The time expression 'When I was young' requires past tense 'loved' rather than present 'love'.

× I especially like the dishes with chili pepper because they hate give me a special exciting sentation different from playful.

✓ I especially liked dishes with chili peppers because they gave me a special, exciting sensation that felt different and playful.

Pronoun 'they' should refer to 'chili peppers' and past context uses 'gave' (past tense). 'hate' is incorrect; 'gave' is correct. 'Sentation' is misspelled; use 'sensation'. Clarify meaning with 'that felt different and playful'.

× Yes I do. I usually eat different and fruits at different times of the years because seasonals in greed seasons and traditional festival dishes influence my toys.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually eat different foods and fruits at different times of the year because seasonal ingredients and traditional festival dishes influence my choices.

Missing punctuation after 'Yes'; 'different and fruits' is incorrect — use 'different foods and fruits'; 'times of the years' should be 'times of the year'; 'seasonals in greed seasons' is garbled — use 'seasonal ingredients'; 'influence my toys' should be 'influence my choices'.

× For example, in summer I prefer like refreshing salads and cold drink, while in winter I enjoy warm shoes and spicy food to keep it warm.

✓ For example, in summer I prefer refreshing salads and cold drinks, while in winter I enjoy warm soups and spicy food to keep warm.

Remove 'like' after 'prefer'; make nouns plural where appropriate: 'cold drinks'; 'warm shoes' is incorrect — intended 'warm soups'; 'to keep it warm' is awkward — use 'to keep warm'.

× No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a choose and used to love rituals and I still do.

✓ No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child; I used to love traditional dishes and I still do.

'choose' is incorrect — should be 'child'; restructure sentence: 'hasn't changed since I was a child' uses present perfect correctly; clarify 'rituals' to 'traditional dishes' to match context.

× I have really changed my taste most until I tend to eat lightened meals in summer and healthier food in winter.

✓ My tastes have changed a lot; now I tend to eat lighter meals in summer and healthier foods in winter.

Use present perfect 'have changed' for recent changes; 'most until' is incorrect and removed; 'lightened meals' should be 'lighter meals'; 'healthier food' -> 'healthier foods' for parallelism and generalization.