Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần tránh nhiều tiếng ậm ừ và nói lộn ý. Trả lời nên rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do ngắn gọn bằng 1-2 câu hỗ trợ. Dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ “chicken and rice” thay vì “rice chicken”) và tránh mâu thuẫn trong cùng câu (không nói vừa thích thịt vừa thích rau làm câu mơ hồ).

例: My favourite food used to be chicken with rice because I enjoyed its comforting taste. However, recently I prefer vegetables and fruits because I want to eat healthier.

提案: Cần dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ và tránh kết thúc câu lủng củng. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm một lý do cụ thể. Tránh các từ thừa như “umm” và “uh”.

例: When I was young, I liked chicken and soda because they tasted delicious and were easy to get from my parents or local shops.

提案: Câu trả lời nên nêu rõ thay đổi theo mùa cụ thể và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “eat more vegetables and fruits” thay vì “eat vegetable and fruit so much”).

例: Yes, I do. In winter I tend to eat warmer, heavier meals like stews, while in summer I eat more vegetables and fruits to stay refreshed and healthy.

提案: Cần diễn đạt rõ ý thay đổi khẩu vị, dùng từ đúng (e.g., “fried and processed food” thay cho “fry and passive food”) và giải thích nguyên nhân ngắn gọn. Tránh câu bị dở dang và tiếng ngập ngừng.

例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. I no longer like fried or processed foods because I know they are unhealthy, so now I prefer fresh meals with vegetables and lean proteins.

× My favorite food is rice chicken, but now, uh, my favorite food is vegetable or uh, fruit.

✓ My favorite food used to be chicken and rice, but now my favorite foods are vegetables and fruits.

The original sentence has several issues: incorrect noun order ('rice chicken' -> 'chicken and rice'), article and number errors ('vegetable or fruit' should be plural 'vegetables and fruits' to match general preference), and redundant repetition. Use plural when speaking about types of food in general. Also use 'used to be' to express a past preference that has changed. Suggestion: say 'My favorite food used to be chicken and rice, but now my favorite foods are vegetables and fruits.' Note: This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× When I was young, umm, I like chicken and drink soda because, uh, it's a delicious but.

✓ When I was young, I liked chicken and drank soda because they were delicious.

The clause starts with 'When I was young', which requires past tense for the actions that follow. 'Like' should be past 'liked' and 'drink' should be past 'drank'. 'It's a delicious but' is ungrammatical: use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to both items and 'delicious' without 'but'. Suggestion: 'When I was young, I liked chicken and drank soda because they were delicious.' Note: This correction addresses tense consistency and pronoun reference.

× Yes I do, because I want to, uh, improve, improve, uh, healthy, umm, I want to eat vegetable and fruit so much.

✓ Yes, I do, because I want to improve my health, and I want to eat vegetables and fruits a lot.

The student mixes awkward phrasing and wrong noun forms. 'Improve healthy' is incorrect; use 'improve my health' or 'be healthier'. 'Vegetable and fruit' should be plural: 'vegetables and fruits'. 'So much' is informal; 'a lot' fits spoken English. Ensure verb forms match present tense intention. Suggestion: 'Yes, I do, because I want to improve my health, and I want to eat vegetables and fruits a lot.' Note: This correction addresses noun form and collocation errors.

× Now I don't like food, fry and passive food because it is not healthy. Umm, is that I can? It's.

✓ Now I don't like fried or processed foods because they are not healthy.

'Fry' is a verb; the adjective form is 'fried'. 'Passive food' is incorrect; likely meant 'processed food'. Use plural 'foods' when speaking generally and plural pronoun 'they' to match. 'It is not healthy' should be 'they are not healthy'. The trailing fragments ('Is that I can? It's.') are unclear and should be omitted. Suggestion: 'Now I don't like fried or processed foods because they are not healthy.' Note: This correction addresses incorrect adjective use and plural agreement.