Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence naming your favourite food, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (“dirty food”). Use correct verb forms and simple linking words (but, however). Aim for 2–4 sentences, and correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles).

例: My favourite food is Chinese cuisine, especially Sichuan dishes. However, it depends on my mood: at home I usually prefer simple homemade meals, while when I go out with friends I enjoy eating fast food like burgers or pizza.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences and follow with one or two specific examples. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Replace vague lists with a short, organized list and a brief reason or memory. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: When I was young I preferred junk food, especially pizza, burgers and pasta. I often ate snacks and drank cold sodas after school because my parents bought them as treats.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear example that contrasts seasons or occasions (e.g., summer vs winter). Use simple linking words (for example, in winter, during summer) and correct tense. Avoid vague or unfinished sentences; finish your thought with a specific detail.

例: Yes, my diet changes with the seasons. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I like lighter foods such as salads and cold noodles.

提案: Give a clear statement whether it has changed, then briefly explain how and why. Use correct tense and avoid unclear phrases like “food chain.” Provide one specific change and a reason (health, taste, lifestyle). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to eat mostly snacks and sweets, but now I prefer healthier meals like grilled chicken and vegetables because I care more about my health.

× Well my favorite food is a Chinese food but sometime it depend on my mood.

✓ Well, my favorite food is Chinese food, but sometimes it depends on my mood.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' before uncountable or general cuisine names is incorrect; say 'Chinese food' rather than 'a Chinese food'. 'Sometime' should be plural 'sometimes'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it depend' should be 'it depends' because subject 'it' requires third person singular verb. Add commas for clarity.

× When I I am at home then I prefer to eat a dirty food but when I go to with my friends to outside then I prefer to eat a junk food.

✓ When I am at home, I prefer to eat simple/comfort food, but when I go out with my friends, I prefer to eat junk food.

Avoid 'a' before uncountable or general nouns like 'junk food' and 'dirty food' (which is unnatural); choose 'simple/comfort food'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Use 'go out with my friends' not 'go to with my friends to outside'. Commas improve sentence flow.

× So it's depend on my mood and the situation.

✓ So it depends on my mood and the situation.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it depend' must be 'it depends' for third person singular present tense.

× According to the situation it's change.

✓ According to the situation, it changes.

Incorrect verb form: 'it's change' is wrong; use third person singular present 'it changes'. Add a comma for clarity.

× When I was young I most prefer to eat a junk food like pizza, burger, pasta, macaroni, ATC and and most of the time I prefer to eat like some snacks and either drink the cold drinks and I remember when I was the young I, I was really.

✓ When I was young I mostly preferred to eat junk food like pizza, burgers, pasta and macaroni. Most of the time I ate snacks and drank cold drinks, and I remember when I was young I was really (missing completion).

Tense consistency: describing past habits requires past tense ('preferred', 'ate', 'drank'). 'Most' should be 'mostly'. Remove article 'a' before 'junk food' and pluralize 'burger' as examples. 'ATC' unclear; omitted. The final fragment is incomplete; indicate missing information.

× Uh, yes, I eat a different food at a different time of the year.

✓ Uh, yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Pluralization: use plural 'foods' and 'times' when speaking generally about multiple occasions during a year.

× For example, uh, when I was like at the previous year, I preferred to eat just pizza, burger and I like pasta.

✓ For example, last year I preferred to eat just pizza and burgers, and I liked pasta.

Use 'last year' instead of 'at the previous year'. Maintain past tense: 'preferred' and 'liked'. Make 'burgers' plural and remove 'just' before 'pizza' or keep consistent list phrasing.

× But this year I will have a totally different food taste to eat in this year I eat, I eat just.

✓ But this year I have a totally different taste in food; this year I eat different things.

Avoid unnecessary future 'will' if referring to current year. 'A totally different food taste to eat in this year' is awkward; use 'a totally different taste in food'. Remove repetition and incomplete fragment.

× Uh yes, my favorite food is food chain since I were a child when I was at a younger I remember or I just want to eat like snacks and and and sugar.

✓ Yes, my favorite foods have been fast food since I was a child. When I was younger, I remember I just wanted to eat snacks and sweets.

'Food chain' is likely incorrect for 'fast food' or 'fast-food chains'. Use plural 'foods' or 'fast food'. Tense consistency: 'since I were' should be 'since I was'. 'At a younger' is incorrect; use 'younger'. 'Want' should be past 'wanted' for past habits. Use 'sweets' instead of 'sugar' for clarity.

× But I change this according to the situation and I I was used to the eat.

✓ But I change this according to the situation, and I used to eat differently.

Tense and phrasing: 'I change this' present is acceptable if talking generally, but 'and I I was used to the eat' is ungrammatical; use 'I used to eat' or 'I used to eat differently'. Remove duplicated 'I' and 'the' before 'eat'. Ensure consistent tense and clear expression.