Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal değil ve kaba bir ifadeye sahip. Soruya doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, gereksiz tekrar ve konuşma dilindeki kısaltmalardan kaçının. Kısa bir sebep verin ve gerekirse alternatif bir olumlu ifade ekleyin. 3-4 cümleyi geçmeyin ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın. Örnek olarak neden belirli bir yemeği sevmediğinizi nazikçe açıklayın veya sevmediğinizi söyleyip sağlıklı seçenekleri tercih ettiğinizi belirtin.

例: I don't have a single favourite food because I'm quite selective about what I eat. I tend to avoid very fatty or heavily processed dishes since they don't agree with me. Instead, I prefer simple, healthy meals like grilled fish or salads most of the time.

提案: Cevap tek cümle ve dilbilgisi hatalı; geçmiş zaman kullanılmalı. Daha doğal bir yapı kurup kısa bir örnek veya karşılaştırma ekleyin (örneğin belirli bir yemek veya tada dair). Bağlaçlarla önceki duruma göre değişiklik varsa onu da belirtin. 2-3 cümle ile açık ama öz bir yanıt verin.

例: When I was young, I wasn't very fond of most foods and I ate only a few simple dishes. For example, I usually only liked plain pasta or bread, and I often refused vegetables. As I grew older, I started trying and enjoying more varieties.

提案: Cevap mantıksal değil ve tekrarlı; ayrıca dilbilgisi hataları var. Mevsime göre beslenme değişiklikleri varsa doğrudan belirtin ve en az bir örnek verin (mevsim sebzeleri, tatiller vs.). Bağlaç kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın. Yanıtı 2-4 cümle ile sınırlayın.

例: Yes, I do vary my diet throughout the year. In summer I eat more salads and fresh fruit because they're refreshing, while in winter I prefer warming soups and stews. Seasonal vegetables and local fruits usually determine what I cook.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ama kısa; daha doğal bir yapı kullanarak geçmiş ve şimdiki durumu karşılaştırın. Sebep vererek yanıtı zenginleştirin (örneğin seçici kişiliğiniz veya sağlık nedenleri). 2-3 cümle yeterli olacaktır ve bağlaçlarla mantık kurulmalı.

例: No, it hasn't changed because I never really had a favourite food as a child. I tend to be selective about what I eat, so even now I prefer to choose meals based on how healthy they are rather than having a single favourite.

× Actually, I don't have a favorite food 'cause I hate foods, to be honest. And why you gonna ask Why? Because foods make me fat.

✓ Actually, I don't have a favorite food because I hate food, to be honest. And why are you asking? Because food makes me fat.

Pronoun and verb use: 'you gonna ask' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'are you asking' for present continuous question. 'Foods' is unnecessary when talking about food in general; use uncountable 'food'. 'Because' should be used instead of colloquial ''cause'. Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'food makes me fat'. Suggestions: use standard forms in formal speaking, use uncountable nouns for general references, and form questions with auxiliary verbs.

× When I was young, I don't like food too.

✓ When I was young, I didn't like food either.

Tense and adverb choice: The time clause 'When I was young' requires past tense 'didn't like' not present 'don't like'. Use 'either' for negative agreement instead of 'too'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions and use 'either' after negative statements.

× Yes, of course, because I must eat food. Eat different foods, because I need to leave. And if you want to leave, you must eat foods.

✓ Yes, of course, because I have to eat. I eat different foods because I need to live. And if you want to live, you must eat food.

Meaning and word choice: 'must eat food' is grammatical but repetitive; 'have to eat' is more natural. 'Eat different foods' fragment needed subject 'I'. 'I need to leave' likely intended 'live' — 'leave' is incorrect context. 'Foods' plural unnecessary; use uncountable 'food'. Suggestions: ensure complete sentences with subjects, choose correct verbs ('live' vs 'leave'), and use 'food' as uncountable for general statements.

× I didn't have a favorite food and I don't have a favorite food now.

✓ I didn't have a favorite food when I was a child, and I don't have one now.

Clarity and pronoun use: Repeat of 'favorite food' is acceptable but 'one' avoids repetition. Add 'when I was a child' for clarity matching examiner's question. Tenses are fine but specify time frame. Suggestion: use 'one' to replace repeated nouns and add time phrases to clarify comparisons between past and present.