Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and direct: state the dish, give 1–2 clear reasons, and avoid redundant or ungrammatical phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Also correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer it when I'm stressed" → "I like to eat it when I'm stressed").

例: My favourite food is Tom Yum, a spicy-sour Thai soup. I love it because the hot and sour flavours are comforting, and I often eat it when I’m stressed to help me relax.

提案: Answer directly about childhood tastes and use correct tense and clearer reasons. Avoid repeating words and explain briefly why you preferred that food as a child. Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly.

例: When I was young, I loved Thai food, especially Tom Yum, because it was what my family cooked at home. Even now that I study in Malaysia and try local dishes, I still prefer Tom Yum because I’m used to its flavours.

提案: Give a clearer seasonal or situational answer. If you mean you eat different foods when living abroad, state that and give a specific example and reason. Use correct grammar and linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I do. Since I’m studying in Malaysia, I often eat Malaysian dishes like nasi lemak during the school year. However, I still eat Thai food, especially on special occasions or when I miss home.

提案: Respond directly and correct awkward phrases. Say clearly that your favourite food hasn’t changed and give 1–2 concise reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitation words like "uh" and unclear expressions like "reduce this for a long day."

例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed. I still love Tom Yum because its sour and spicy flavours are refreshing, and eating it helps me feel better after a long day.

× My favorite food is Tom Yum, which is Thai food. This is very delicious for many people in the country, so I love it. I prefer it's every time when I stress.

✓ My favorite food is Tom Yum, which is Thai. It is very popular in my country, so I love it. I prefer it whenever I am stressed.

Pronoun and contraction errors: 'it's' (it is) is incorrect for 'it' as an object; use 'it' or 'prefer it'. Tense and continuous forms: use 'whenever I am stressed' to express repeated situations. 'This is very delicious for many people' is awkward; 'It is very popular' or 'many people find it delicious' is clearer. Suggestions: use 'it' as object pronoun, 'whenever' for repeated occasions, and present simple or present continuous correctly (I am stressed).

× I enjoy to eat Thai food such as Tom Yum because I cannot eat Malaysia food which which now I study in the Malaysia so I still love Tom Yum.

✓ I enjoy eating Thai food such as Tom Yum because I cannot eat Malaysian food while I am studying in Malaysia, so I still love Tom Yum.

After 'enjoy' use the gerund (verb + -ing): 'enjoy eating'. Adjective form: use 'Malaysian' (adjective) instead of 'Malaysia'. Use 'while I am studying' to indicate current ongoing action (present continuous). Remove duplicate 'which' and unnecessary articles: 'in the Malaysia' should be 'in Malaysia'. Suggestions: use gerunds after 'enjoy', correct adjective forms, and use present continuous for ongoing actions.

× Yes I eat different food at different time of this year because now I study in Malaysia so I must be eat Malaysia food such as nasi lemak. So make me enjoy certain.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because I am studying in Malaysia now, so I have to eat Malaysian foods such as nasi lemak. It makes me enjoy my studies more.

Plural and time expressions: use plural 'foods' and 'different times of the year'. Present continuous for current study: 'I am studying'. Modal and verb form: 'must be eat' is ungrammatical; use 'have to eat' or 'must eat'. Adjective form: 'Malaysian' not 'Malaysia'. Sentence fragments: 'So make me enjoy certain' is unclear; revise to complete thought like 'It makes me enjoy my studies more' or 'It gives me enjoyment.' Suggestions: correct plurals, use 'have to' for obligation, use present continuous for ongoing actions, and complete the sentence to clarify meaning.

× No, when I was a shy until now, I still love Tom Yum which is Thai food. So uh, I love it because it is sour and spicy. Make me uh, reduce this for a long day.

✓ No, I was shy when I was younger, but I still love Tom Yum, which is Thai food. I love it because it is sour and spicy. It helps me feel better after a long day.

Incorrect tense and word order: 'when I was a shy until now' is incorrect; use 'I was shy when I was younger' or similar. Use contrast: 'but' to link past characteristic to current preference. Sentence fragment 'Make me uh, reduce this for a long day' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is 'It helps me feel better after a long day' or 'It reduces my stress after a long day.' Use correct verb forms and subjects: start with 'It helps...' Suggestions: express past habits with past tense, connect with 'but' for contrast, and use clear verbs like 'helps' or 'reduces' with appropriate objects.