Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a slightly longer, more natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or a brief description. Use linking words if you add details. Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

例: I really enjoy Chicken Royal. It’s a roasted chicken dish with a savory herb sauce, and I like it because the meat is tender and the flavors are rich. I usually have it on special occasions, so it feels a bit indulgent.

提案: Answer directly and clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar (past tense) and give a specific example or reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (for example, when, because).

例: When I was young, I liked Chinese food a lot. For example, I often ate dumplings and fried rice because they were tasty and easy to share with my family.

提案: Provide a fuller answer: start with a direct response, then briefly explain why or give an example. Use linking words such as ‘because’ or ‘however’ to connect ideas. Aim for 2 sentences to sound natural and informative.

例: Not really, I don’t eat very different foods across the year because my family usually cooks the same staples. However, we sometimes prepare special dishes for festivals, like mooncakes in autumn.

提案: Clarify your meaning with a full sentence: say whether it has changed or not, then explain how and why. Provide a specific comparison (what you liked then vs now) and use linking words such as ‘when’ or ‘because’.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was a child I preferred simple snacks, but now I enjoy more elaborate dishes like Chicken Royal because I appreciate richer flavours and different cooking styles.

× I good. MMM China food.

✓ I liked Chinese food.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and includes nonstandard vocabulary. This is a sentence structure error (no finite verb). Also 'China food' is incorrect adjective use; the adjective should be 'Chinese'. Use past tense 'liked' because the examiner asked about when you were young (past time). Suggestion: include a subject and past-tense verb and use the adjective form 'Chinese' instead of 'China'.

× Yes, that amount.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot.

The reply 'Yes, that amount.' is ungrammatical and lacks a verb and clear meaning, so it is a sentence structure error. The question asks whether the favourite food changed since childhood, so use present perfect 'has changed' to link past to present, and an adverb/adverbial 'a lot' to indicate degree. Suggestion: use a complete clause (subject + auxiliary + past participle) and an appropriate adverbial to express the extent of change.