Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp ý và dùng câu chủ đề mạnh hơn. Bạn nên nêu rõ loại thịt yêu thích (ví dụ: pork, beef, chicken) và thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về cách chế biến hoặc lý do bạn thích. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, because) để mạch lạc hơn và giữ tối đa 3 câu.

例: My favourite food is grilled beef because I love its smoky flavour and tender texture. For example, in Vietnam we often eat it with rice or in a noodle soup, which makes the meal feel hearty and satisfying.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi thì và cấu trúc thời không nhất quán (mix present and past). Nên nói rõ thời quá khứ bằng cấu trúc như ‘I liked…’ và giải thích vì sao, kèm ví dụ cụ thể (món ăn, tần suất). Giữ 2-3 câu, dùng liên từ (because, so) để rõ lý do.

例: When I was young, I liked eating fast food because it was tasty and convenient. For example, I often had burgers and fries after school, although I knew it wasn't healthy if eaten too often.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại mâu thuẫn và thiếu cụ thể: câu hỏi hỏi về các mùa trong năm nhưng bạn trả lời về thói quen hàng ngày và dịp đặc biệt. Hãy trả lời đúng trọng tâm: nêu nếu bạn thay đổi theo mùa (ví dụ: mùa hè ăn đồ mát, mùa đông ăn đồ nóng) rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ (however, for special occasions) để phân biệt ý.

例: Not really; my everyday meals are similar, usually meat and vegetables. However, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I choose lighter dishes like salads. For special occasions, I enjoy formal multi-course meals with family.

提案: Câu trả lời lộn xộn về thì và cấu trúc; nội dung thiếu rõ ràng (nhắc ‘didn't change’ nhưng giải thích bằng lí do không mạch lạc). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No), dùng thì phù hợp, nêu lí do rõ ràng và rút gọn (2-3 câu). Tránh mô tả mơ hồ như “spicy salt and salt”.

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood because I still enjoy fast food for its strong flavours and convenience. For example, I often crave spicy fried chicken or burgers because they are comforting and easy to eat when I'm busy.

× My favorite food is meat, which is common at meals in Vietnam.

✓ My favorite food is meat, which is common in meals in Vietnam.

Use of preposition: 'common at meals' is less natural; use 'common in meals' to indicate something frequently included within meals. Suggestion: use 'in' to show inclusion within meals.

× In Vietnam, we always have meat in dinner, in lunch and even in morning.

✓ In Vietnam, we always have meat for dinner, for lunch and even in the morning.

Preposition and article use: use 'for' to indicate the occasion (for dinner/lunch), and include the article 'the' with 'morning'. Suggestion: say 'for dinner', 'for lunch', 'in the morning' or 'for the morning'.

× Like many people when I was young, I like to eat fast food, although it's not good for my health if I eat a lot of.

✓ Like many people when I was young, I liked to eat fast food, although it's not good for my health if I eat a lot of it.

Tense and missing object: The time clause 'when I was young' requires past tense 'liked' to match. Also 'a lot of' needs an object ('it') or a noun. Suggestion: use past tense for habits in the past and include the pronoun 'it' after 'a lot of'.

× Yes, I do every day. I often eat meat and vegetables, but when I have a special occasion or events, I like to eat formal meals instead of eat something casual.

✓ Yes, I do every day. I often eat meat and vegetables, but when I have a special occasion or event, I like to eat formal meals instead of something casual.

Grammar issues: 'a special occasion or events' mixes singular and plural; choose 'occasion or event' (both singular) or plural both. Also after 'instead of' use a noun phrase not an infinitive, so remove 'eat'. Suggestion: use parallel number and correct structure 'instead of something casual'.

× To be honest, my favorite food didn't change since I was a child when I'm mature and still like to eat fast food because it's flavor combined with spicy salt and salt so it brings me a sense of comfortable.

✓ To be honest, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child; now that I'm mature I still like to eat fast food because its flavor, combined with spices and salt, gives me a sense of comfort.

Multiple problems: Use of tense with 'since' requires present perfect 'hasn't changed' for a situation continuing to the present. 'When I'm mature' is incorrect; use 'now that I'm mature' or 'now that I am older'. Possessive 'its' required for 'flavor'. 'Spicy salt and salt' is redundant; use 'spices and salt'. 'Brings me a sense of comfortable' is ungrammatical; use 'gives me a sense of comfort'. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing states, correct connectors ('now that'), possessive adjectives, and appropriate noun forms.