Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, fluent and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, um), and give one or two concise supporting details (e.g., what you like about the dish and when you eat it). Use linking words if adding details. Keep it under five sentences.

例: My favorite food is chicken biryani. I love it because the rice is fragrant with spices and the meat is tender. I usually eat it on special occasions or at family gatherings, which makes it taste even better.

提案: Answer directly with a clear past preference and avoid grammatical errors and fillers. Use simple past or past habit expressions (e.g., 'When I was young, I loved...'). Provide a specific reason and an example. Keep sentences short and coherent.

例: When I was young, I loved eating biscuits. I especially liked Tiger biscuits because they were sweet and crunchy. I often had them as an after-school snack.

提案: Be specific about seasonal variations and give clear examples. Use linking words (for example, in summer/during festivals) and correct verb forms. Eliminate repetitions and fillers, and state reasons or occasions for the variations.

例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more fruits and salads to stay cool, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews. During festivals, my family cooks special dishes like biryani and sweets.

提案: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer and briefly explain why or provide a contrast. Use a topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns.

例: No, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child. I still love chicken biryani because it reminds me of family celebrations and tastes the same as before.

× My favorite food is chicken biryani because I really enjoyed UH.

✓ My favorite food is chicken biryani because I really enjoy it.

The speaker uses past tense 'enjoyed' but is stating a current preference; present simple 'enjoy' is required to match the present-tense statement. Also replace filler 'UH' with 'it'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual or current likes (I really enjoy it).

× Umm, for my young I would really like to eating uh, biscuits because it's uh, suits, very tasty and I really enjoy it.

✓ When I was young, I really liked eating biscuits because they were very tasty and I really enjoyed them.

Multiple problems: 'for my young' is an incorrect phrase and should be 'When I was young' (time expression). 'I would really like to eating' mixes modal/conditional with -ing form incorrectly; simple past 'liked eating' fits. 'It's uh, suits' is incorrect pronoun and verb agreement; 'they were' matches plural 'biscuits'. Also change 'I really enjoy it' to past tense 'I really enjoyed them' to be consistent. Suggestion: use clear time expression and maintain past tense for childhood preferences; ensure pronoun number matches noun (biscuits -> they/them).

× Especially Tiger Biscuit, it's my favorite Indian.

✓ Especially Tiger biscuits; they're my favorite in India.

The original mixes singular/plural and unclear modifier. 'Tiger Biscuit' should be plural 'Tiger biscuits' if referring to the product type; 'it's my favorite Indian' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'my favorite in India'. Use contraction or full form: 'they are my favorite in India.' Suggestion: ensure noun number matches and place qualifiers (in India) correctly.

× Yes, umm, I do. I eat uh different foods in different types of the year.

✓ Yes, I do. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

'Different types of the year' is incorrect word choice and word order. The correct expression is 'at different times of the year'. Suggestion: use the idiomatic phrase 'at different times of the year' to express seasonal variation.

× Umm, I eat uh I ate out with umm shivaya mandi and different types of different kinds of food.

✓ I have eaten out at places like Shivaya Mandi and tried many different kinds of food.

The sentence mixes tenses ('I eat' and 'I ate') and repeats 'different types of different kinds'. Use present perfect 'have eaten' or simple past depending on context; here present perfect fits if speaking about experiences. Also use 'places like' to introduce an example and 'tried many different kinds of food' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid mixing tenses and redundant phrases.

× I really eating and I really enjoy it because it's taste.

✓ I really enjoy it because it tastes good.

'I really eating' is missing a correct verb form; use 'I really enjoy'. 'It's taste' is incorrect: should be 'it tastes' or 'its taste'. Here 'it tastes good' is natural. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' for liking and 'tastes' to describe flavor; ensure subject-verb agreement.

× No, I my favorite food is no change since you I'm a child.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child.

The original mixes pronouns and tenses: 'I my favorite food is no change since you I'm a child' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'has not changed' to indicate a change from past to present, and the correct past time clause 'since I was a child.' Suggestion: use present perfect for situations that started in the past and continue to the present and use correct subject pronouns and word order.