Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more structured, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (flavour, how often, who you eat with). Avoid repetition and long run-on sentences; use linking words like because and so. Also correct small grammar errors (use contractions and articles).

例: I love spicy noodles. I can eat them almost every day because I enjoy the bold, savory flavors and the heat. Because they’re popular at a nearby restaurant, I often invite friends to join me, which makes the meal more fun.

提案: Use correct tense and a clearer structure: state your favourite food in the past, then give one or two specific reasons or a short example. Avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like when and because to connect ideas.

例: When I was young, I really liked fried chicken. I ate it almost every week because it was crispy and tasted great with tomato sauce, and my parents often bought it as a treat.

提案: Answer directly and clearly: begin with Yes/No, then explain briefly with specific examples of seasonal foods. Use correct vocabulary (seasons), avoid fillers and finish the sentence. Use linking words like so or therefore to explain the reason.

例: Yes. I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm, whereas in summer I choose fresh salads and cold fruits to stay cool.

提案: Give a clear comparison between past and present: state the change, then give specific reasons and examples for the change. Avoid hesitations and filler words; correct grammar (use past tense for past habits).

例: Yes. When I was a child I preferred sweets and snacks, but now I prefer healthier foods like grilled fish, vegetables and whole grains because I want to stay fit and feel more energetic.

× My favorite food is spicy noodles I can eat it every day because it's very delicious and tasty spicy so I always invite my friend to go restaurant to eat spicy noodles with me and.

✓ My favorite food is spicy noodles. I can eat them every day because they are very delicious and spicy, so I always invite my friends to go to a restaurant to eat spicy noodles with me.

Errors: run-on sentence, article use, singular/plural, pronouns, and prepositions. 'Spicy noodles' is plural so use plural pronouns 'them' and 'they' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Add a period to separate clauses (Sentence structure, ID 26). 'Friend' should be plural if inviting more than one, or use 'a friend' for singular; here 'friends' is natural (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Add the definite article 'a' before 'restaurant' and preposition 'to' with 'go to a restaurant' (Article errors ID 22, Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). Use 'delicious and spicy' rather than 'delicious and tasty spicy' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ID 13). Suggestions: break long sentences into shorter ones, match nouns and pronouns in number, include necessary articles and prepositions, and order adjectives naturally.

× I think when I were young, I really love eating chicken fry.

✓ I think when I was young, I really loved eating fried chicken.

Errors: incorrect past tense and verb form. Use 'was' not 'were' with singular subject 'I' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'Really love' should be past 'really loved' to match the time frame. 'Chicken fry' is unnatural; correct form is 'fried chicken' (Incorrect use of adjectives/order ID 18 / Incorrect use of adjectives ID 13). Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent with time expressions like 'when I was young' and use standard collocations ('fried chicken').

× This is the best food I can eat every day when I was young because it's very delicious with sauce to tomato sauce.

✓ It was the best food I could eat every day when I was young because it was very delicious with tomato sauce.

Errors: tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. Use past tense 'was' and 'could' to match 'when I was young' (Past tense issue ID 5). Remove redundant 'sauce to' and use 'tomato sauce' (Sentence structure/Incorrect use of prepositions ID 26 and ID 11). Suggestion: ensure tense agreement across the sentence and use correct noun phrases ('tomato sauce').

× Yes, of course, 2 four season, I always try another food in different time of the year because the trends of weather, so I will change the hot food or, uh, cold food to keep my.

✓ Yes, of course. In the four seasons, I always try different foods at different times of the year because of changes in the weather, so I will switch between hot and cold dishes to suit the temperature.

Errors: numeral '2' and phrasing 'four season' incorrect; use 'the four seasons' (Sentence structure/Article errors ID 26 and 22). 'Try another food' should be 'try different foods' to match plural and natural usage (Singular and plural issue ID 1). 'In different time of the year' should be 'at different times of the year' (Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). 'The trends of weather' is unnatural; use 'changes in the weather' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ID 13). Sentence ended abruptly 'to keep my.' Fix pronoun and complete idea: 'to suit the temperature' or 'to keep myself comfortable' (Incorrect use of pronouns/reflexive ID 12/15). Suggestion: use correct prepositions, plural forms for general habits, and complete the clause for clarity.

× Yes of course when I was young I love eating some sweet food like snacks or candies but now I roll up I I prefer eating healthier food such as UMM.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was young, I loved eating sweet foods like snacks or candies, but now I prefer eating healthier food.

Errors: tense inconsistency: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'loved' not present 'love' (Past tense issue ID 5). Use plural 'sweet foods' for general category (Singular and plural issue ID 1). Remove filler 'roll up I I' and 'UMM' as hesitations; keep sentence fluent. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for past habits and avoid fillers in formal responses; use 'prefer' in present tense for current preference.