Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and specific: name the food and give 1–2 clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and unnecessary words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: My favourite food is yogurt with fruit because it is nutritious and easy to buy at any supermarket. Moreover, I often eat it for breakfast since it keeps me full and gives me energy for the morning.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the cuisine, then give specific reasons and one short example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'also' and correct tense/word order.

例: I liked Thai food when I was young because I grew up eating it at home. For example, dishes like chicken coconut soup and stir-fried vegetables felt comforting and were always full of flavour and nutrition.

提案: Answer directly and then give a clear, specific example. Use correct prepositions and verb forms, and link sentences logically (e.g., 'for example', 'in summer'). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: Yes, I do. I like trying foods from other countries at different times of the year; for example, last winter I tried Ethiopian dishes like injera and spiced stews, which I found very interesting and flavorful.

提案: Make a clear comparison between past and present tastes using correct grammar and linking words like 'but' and 'now'. Give one or two specific examples of foods to illustrate the change and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I preferred plain, mild foods, but now I enjoy very spicy dishes such as Thai curries and hot sauces because I like stronger flavours and trying foods from many countries.

× Food because this has a lot of nutrient and it's easy to buy in a supermarket so I shoot this one for my breaky.

✓ Food, because it has a lot of nutrients and is easy to buy in supermarkets, so I choose it for my breakfast.

The sentence has incorrect quantifier usage: 'a lot of nutrient' should be plural 'a lot of nutrients' since 'nutrient' is countable in this context. 'This' as subject is awkward; use 'it'. 'A supermarket' should be plural or generic 'supermarkets'. 'Shoot this one for my breaky' is informal and incorrect verb choice; use 'choose it for my breakfast'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Umm, it especially is the Thai food because I grew up with the Thai food back to my country and it made me feel more comfortable and it's a lot of nutrient when you eat it one meal.

✓ Umm, especially Thai food, because I grew up with it in my country and it made me feel more comfortable, and it has a lot of nutrients in one meal.

'It especially is the Thai food' has awkward word order; place 'especially' before the noun phrase: 'especially Thai food'. 'Grew up with the Thai food back to my country' is ungrammatical; correct to 'grew up with it in my country'. 'A lot of nutrient' should be 'a lot of nutrients'. 'When you eat it one meal' should be 'in one meal' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes, I do. I prefer to explore the new food with the different culture and different country.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to try new foods from different cultures and countries.

Use plural 'foods' for general preference and correct collocations: 'try new foods' (not 'explore the new food') and 'from different cultures and countries' (preposition 'from' is correct). Maintain present simple tense 'prefer to try'.

× For example, I try to Ethiopia food is really nice and it shares my experience.

✓ For example, I tried Ethiopian food; it was really nice and it broadened my experience.

'Try to Ethiopia food' is incorrect. Use past tense 'tried' for a completed experience and correct adjective form 'Ethiopian food'. 'Shares my experience' is incorrect collocation; use 'broadened my experience' or 'was a new experience'. Also separate clauses with a semicolon or period.

× Is captioned a lot because before I love to eat the plain food not too spicy but when I grow up I love the spicy and it's strong trash tester in the food and I really love to explore the new food in many country.

✓ My tastes have changed a lot: before, I liked plain food that was not too spicy, but as I grew up I began to like spicy food with strong flavors, and I really enjoy trying new foods in many countries.

This sentence has multiple structural problems. 'Is captioned a lot' is meaningless here; replace with 'My tastes have changed a lot'. Tenses must be consistent: 'before, I liked' (past), 'as I grew up I began to like' (past), and present general 'I really enjoy trying'. 'The spicy' should be 'spicy food'. 'Strong trash tester' is incorrect phrase; likely intended 'strong taste' or 'strong flavors'. 'In many country' needs plural 'countries'. Reorganize into clear clauses and correct word choices.