Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Улучшите плавность и точность: избегайте речевых ошибок и нелогичных слов (например, «Will made», «wee rich Balinese»), используйте связку из 2–3 предложений: тема + пара поддерживающих деталей. Обратите внимание на артикли и согласование (a massive fan of Italian cuisine; fresh basil, parmesan cheese and olive -> olives). Практикуйте произнесение устойчивых выражений (authentic pasta dishes, carbonara) вслух и исправляйте случайные вставки.

例: My favourite food is Italian cuisine, especially authentic pasta dishes. I love classic carbonara because it combines creamy sauce, pancetta and Parmesan, and I appreciate high-quality ingredients such as fresh basil and good olive oil.

提案: Сосредоточьтесь на ясности и корректной лексике: замените нечёткие или ошибочные слова («massive suite Davis», «chocolate batteries», «dis dusted», «My day it back then») понятными выражениями. Давайте 2–3 предложения: тема (что любили) + конкретные примеры + краткое размышление. Используйте связки (for example, also, however). Тренируйте произношение и подбор слов, чтобы избежать бессвязных фраз.

例: When I was young I loved sweet foods, especially chocolate and ice cream. I ate a lot and avoided vegetables like broccoli and spinach. As a result, my diet back then wasn't very balanced.

提案: Исправьте лексические и грамматические ошибки, используйте точные слова и связующие фразы. Замените несуществующие слова («shipped», «scorching summer moons», «cold soaps», «reinter set ends», «wax stoves», «drink soaps») на естественные выражения: 'change with the seasons', 'hot summer', 'cold soups', 'winter', 'stews', 'hot drinks'. Структурируйте ответ: общее утверждение + примеры летних и зимних блюд, используя связки (for example, in contrast).

例: Yes, my eating habits change with the seasons. In hot summer I prefer light, refreshing meals like crisp salads, cold soups and fresh fruit. In contrast, during winter I crave hearty dishes such as stews, roasts and hot drinks to keep warm.

提案: Улучшите точность грамматики и лексики: замените неверные формы и слова («was involved», «survive on», «simple crabs», «now and learning», «we've grown», «unpatable») корректными выражениями. Дайте чёткое сравнение прошлого и настоящего: тема + причины изменений + пример (linking words: whereas, now, for example). Практикуйте формулирование мнения и причин в двух-трёх предложениях.

例: Yes, my tastes have changed a lot. As a child I mainly ate sugary snacks and plain food, whereas now I prefer savory and complex flavours. For example, I now enjoy spicy dishes like Indian and Thai curries that I would have found unpleasant before.

× This is something incredibly comforting about Will made carbonara or a wee rich Balinese.

✓ There is something incredibly comforting about well-made carbonara or a rich Balinese dish.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect phrase order and word forms. 'This is something' is awkward; use 'There is something' to introduce a general feeling (There be issue, ID 3, but primary is sentence structure—use of infinitive/phrasing). 'Will made' is wrong form; the adjective should be 'well-made'. 'wee' is dialectal and unnecessary here; 'a rich Balinese dish' is clearer. Use correct adjective placement and noun 'dish'. Suggestion: use 'There is something incredibly comforting about well-made carbonara or a rich Balinese dish.'

× I couldn't call myself a foodie, but I highly appreciate high quality ingredients like fresh basil, parmesan cheese and olive.

✓ I couldn't call myself a foodie, but I highly appreciate high-quality ingredients like fresh basil, Parmesan cheese and olive oil.

Adjective 'high quality' should be hyphenated when used before a noun: 'high-quality'. 'Parmesan' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 'Olive' alone is incorrect; the correct noun is 'olive oil'. Use parallel noun forms in a list. Suggestion: use hyphenation and correct nouns: 'high-quality ingredients like fresh basil, Parmesan cheese and olive oil.'

× Looking back, I used to have a massive suite Davis so I was constantly craving things like chocolate batteries and ice cream.

✓ Looking back, I used to have a massive sweet tooth, so I was constantly craving things like chocolate bars and ice cream.

'Had a massive suite Davis' appears to be garbled: the correct idiom is 'had a massive sweet tooth' meaning a strong liking for sweets. 'Chocolate batteries' is wrong; correct is 'chocolate bars'. Maintain past habitual tense 'used to' and past continuous idea 'was constantly craving'. Suggestion: use established idioms and correct nouns: 'massive sweet tooth' and 'chocolate bars.'

× I was also quite a big eater as a child and I absolutely dis dusted anything green, especially broccoli and spinach.

✓ I was also quite a big eater as a child and I absolutely disliked anything green, especially broccoli and spinach.

'Dis dusted' is a corrupted form; the intended verb is likely 'disliked' or 'detested'. Use 'disliked' for milder meaning. Maintain past tense to match 'was'. Suggestion: use a single correct past-tense verb 'disliked' or 'detested.'

× My day it back then wasn't particularly balanced but I suppose that's quite.

✓ My diet back then wasn't particularly balanced, but I suppose that's quite common.

'My day it back then' is garbled; intended is 'My diet back then'. Also sentence ends abruptly 'that's quite' — add 'common' to complete the thought. Keep past tense 'wasn't'. Suggestion: correct typographical errors and complete the comparative phrase: 'My diet back then wasn't particularly balanced, but I suppose that's quite common.'

× My daily habits definitely shipped with the seasons.

✓ My daily habits definitely shift with the seasons.

'Shipped' is past tense and incorrect meaning; present tense 'shift' is required to describe a habitual action. Keep simple present for general truths. Suggestion: use 'shift' rather than 'shipped.'

× During the scorching summer moons, I tend of the for a lighter, more refreshing meals like crisp salads, cold soaps and fresh fruits to stay hydrated.

✓ During the scorching summer months, I tend to opt for lighter, more refreshing meals like crisp salads, cold soups and fresh fruits to stay hydrated.

Multiple errors: 'summer moons' should be 'summer months'. 'tend of the for' is garbled; correct is 'tend to opt for' or 'tend to choose'. 'meals' should agree with plural 'lighter, more refreshing meals' — keep that. 'cold soaps' is wrong; intended 'cold soups'. Maintain present habitual 'tend to'. Suggestion: 'During the scorching summer months, I tend to opt for lighter, more refreshing meals like crisp salads, cold soups and fresh fruits.'

× Conversely, when reinter set ends, I crave hearty warming dishes, wax stoves, roasts and drink soaps which keep me warm and.

✓ Conversely, when winter sets in, I crave hearty, warming dishes such as stews, roasts and hot soups which keep me warm.

This sentence contains many typos and structure errors: 'reinter set ends' -> 'winter sets in'. 'wax stoves' likely 'stews'. 'drink soaps' -> 'hot soups'. Add final word to complete thought; remove trailing 'and.' Keep present tense 'crave' for habitual preference. Suggestion: correct seasonal expression and food names: 'winter sets in' and 'stews, roasts and hot soups.'

× Without a doubt, my palate was involved significantly over the years.

✓ Without a doubt, my palate has evolved significantly over the years.

'Was involved' is wrong collocation. Use present perfect 'has evolved' to indicate change over a period up to now. 'Palate has evolved' is the appropriate expression. Suggestion: use 'has evolved' for changes over time: 'my palate has evolved significantly over the years.'

× As I mentioned, I used to survive on sugary treats and simple crabs, whereas now and learning much more towards savory and complex flavors, we've grown to appreciate spicy foods like Indian and Thai curries which would have found completely unpatable and over.

✓ As I mentioned, I used to live on sugary treats and simple carbs, whereas now I'm leaning much more towards savory and complex flavors; I've grown to appreciate spicy foods like Indian and Thai curries which I would have found completely unpalatable before.

Many issues: 'survive on' is odd; 'live on' suits habitual past. 'simple crabs' should be 'simple carbs' (carbohydrates). 'now and learning' -> 'now I'm leaning'. 'we've grown' mismatches subject; use 'I've grown' if referring to self. 'would have found completely unpatable and over' -> 'would have found completely unpalatable before.' Use present perfect 'I've grown' to indicate change. Suggestion: correct verbs, nouns and use consistent subject and tense: 'I've grown to appreciate... which I would have found completely unpalatable before.'