Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and add a brief reason and one specific detail. Avoid short fragmented sentences and check article use. Use a topic sentence, then a linking phrase and a specific detail.

例: My favourite food is pizza, especially ranch pizza. I usually order it because I love the creamy ranch sauce and the combination of cheese and herbs, which makes it rich and comforting.

提案: Correct grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement) and be specific about the reasons. Use one topic sentence in past tense, then a linking word and a clear description of the flavour. Avoid unclear words like "tangled."

例: When I was young, I liked pizza, particularly ranch pizza, because the creamy dressing and melted cheese tasted comforting and slightly tangy, which I always enjoyed.

提案: Provide a clear, coherent structure: state whether you change foods with seasons, then give two specific examples with linking words. Fix articles and prepositions and avoid repetition. Be specific about the dishes and reasons (e.g., warming in winter, refreshing in summer).

例: Yes, I do change my diet with the seasons. For example, in winter I enjoy warm, sweet dishes like hot pudding or stew because they are comforting, while in summer I prefer light, refreshing foods such as salads and cold fruit because they help me feel cool.

提案: Answer directly with correct grammar and clarify the second point. If your favourite hasn't changed, say so and then explain how your food preferences have expanded with age, giving one or two specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases like "add money."

例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed — I still love pizza. However, my tastes have broadened and I now enjoy many other foods too, such as sushi and grilled vegetables, which I try when I go out to new restaurants.

× When I were young, I like pizza, especially ranch pizza, because I like the creamy and tangled with a tangled flavor.

✓ When I was young, I liked pizza, especially ranch pizza, because I liked the creamy and tangy flavor.

Problems: 'were' should be 'was' because the subject 'I' uses singular past tense (third person singular rule does not apply but past tense form of 'to be' for I is 'was'). 'like' should be 'liked' to keep past tense consistent. 'tangled with a tangled flavor' is incorrect word choice and repetition; 'tangy' better conveys a creamy, slightly sharp flavor. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and choose accurate adjectives ('tangy') instead of incorrect phrasing.

× My favorite food is pizza. I often eat ranch pizza.

✓ My favorite food is pizza. I often eat ranch pizza.

No correction needed for tense, but ensure consistency: 'is' correctly states a present preference and 'often eat' correctly expresses habitual action. Keep as is.

× Yes, I prefer to have a special food for a special month on a year. For example, on winter I like to eat the sweet, the sweetie dishes while on on summer I prefer to eat.

✓ Yes, I prefer to have a special food for a special month each year. For example, in winter I like to eat sweet dishes, while in summer I prefer lighter foods.

Problems: 'on a year' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'each year' or 'a year'. Seasons use preposition 'in' not 'on' ('in winter', 'in summer'). 'the sweet, the sweetie dishes' is ungrammatical and 'sweet dishes' or 'desserts' is appropriate. Suggestion: use 'each year', 'in winter', and simplify noun phrases like 'sweet dishes' and contrast with 'lighter foods' for summer.

× No, actually I doesn't change my favorite food, but I add money, money of foods and money on my list.

✓ No, actually I haven't changed my favorite food, but I have added more foods to my list.

Problems: 'doesn't change' is wrong for expressing a change up to now; use present perfect 'haven't changed' for experience up to present. 'I add money, money of foods and money on my list' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely meant 'added more foods to my list.' Suggestion: use present perfect for life changes and simplify to 'added more foods to my list.'