Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if you add details and avoid repetition. Also correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., "which is called" unnecessary).

例: My favourite food is roti. It’s a flatbread made from flour, water and a little salt, and I enjoy it because it’s simple and goes well with many curries.

提案: Answer directly in past tense for childhood questions, then contrast briefly with the present if needed. Keep sentences grammatical and avoid contradiction like "now I am young as well." Use a linking word for contrast (e.g., "when I was a child" / "now").

例: When I was a child, I liked roti the most because it was easy to eat. Now I still enjoy roti, although I also like rice and vegetables.

提案: Focus the answer on seasonal changes as asked. Start with a direct response (Yes/No), then give specific seasonal examples. Use linking phrases such as "for example" and avoid filler like "yeah, that's it."

例: Not really; most people in my country eat the same basic foods throughout the year. For example, we usually have rice or roti every day with curries, fish and vegetables, although special festivals bring extra dishes.

提案: Use past tense to describe childhood and present tense for now. Keep it concise: state whether it changed, give a brief reason or example, and use linking words like "but" or "now" correctly. Correct phrasing such as "when I was a child" and "my tastes have shifted."

例: Yes, my tastes have changed. When I was a child I often loved chocolates and cookies, but now I prefer healthier foods like rice, roti, vegetables, fish and curries.

× 'My favorite food is which is called roti that it is make of flour, water and some a little amount of salt.'

✓ 'My favorite food is roti. It is made of flour, water and a small amount of salt.'

'Errors: unnecessary filler words (which is called), article misuse (some a little amount), wrong verb form (make -> made). Suggestions: remove redundant phrase "which is called", split into two clear sentences, use passive past participle "made" for ingredients, and use "a small amount of salt" or "a little salt" for natural phrasing.'

× 'Now I am young as well, but when I was child I like roti the most.'

✓ 'Now I am young as well, but when I was a child I liked roti the most.'

'Errors: missing article before "child" (should be "a child") and incorrect tense/number agreement (like -> liked) to match past time reference. Suggestions: add the indefinite article "a" before singular countable nouns and use past tense when referring to past habits.'

× 'But at this moment I also like roti.'

✓ 'But at the moment I also like roti.'

'Errors: phrase "at this moment" is not wrong but "at the moment" is more natural. Also ensure present simple "like" is correct for general preference. Suggestions: use idiomatic expressions ("at the moment") for current states.'

× 'In our country, most of the people eat regular food daily basis.'

✓ 'In our country, most people eat regular food on a daily basis.'

'Errors: extra article "the" before "people" and incorrect preposition/phrase "daily basis" needs "on a daily basis". Suggestions: remove unnecessary "the" with "most people" and use the correct collocation "on a daily basis".'

× 'Like they eat rice or roti everyday with some sort of Curry, some sort of fish and vegetable.'

✓ 'For example, they eat rice or roti every day with some kind of curry, some fish and vegetables.'

'Errors: "Like" is informal for giving examples; use "for example". "Everyday" (adjective) should be two words "every day" for frequency. "Some sort of" is wordy; "some kind of" is better, and count nouns need plural when general (vegetable -> vegetables). Capitalization of "Curry" unnecessary. Suggestions: use "for example", "every day", and correct noun number and lower-case common nouns.'

× 'Sometimes when I was child I love to eat chocolates, cookies but now I'm day by day getting older and my choice shifted and nowadays I love rice, roti and vegetables, fish, curries.'

✓ 'When I was a child, I loved to eat chocolates and cookies, but now, as I get older, my choices have shifted and nowadays I like rice, roti, vegetables and fish, and curries.'

'Errors: missing article "a" before "child", inconsistent tense (was -> loved), awkward phrase "I'm day by day getting older" (use "as I get older"), incorrect tense for change that started in past and continues ("have shifted"), plural agreement and list punctuation. Suggestions: add "a" before "child", use past tense for past habits (loved), use progressive phrase "as I get older" for gradual change, use present perfect "have shifted" to show change up to now, and list items clearly.'