Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류(예: 'most sweetest')와 불필요한 반복('I love sweet things'과 'I love this cake')가 있습니다. 답변은 직접적인 주제문으로 시작하고, 연결어를 사용해 구체적 이유나 짧은 예시를 하나 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다. 어휘는 적절하지만 형용사 중복과 관사·단수·복수 일치를 확인하세요. 발음이나 유창성에서 망설임이 적고 3문장 이내로 명확하게 정리해 보세요.

例: My favourite food is strawberry cake. I enjoy it because I have a sweet tooth and the fresh strawberries add a light, fruity flavour. For example, I often choose strawberry cake for special occasions because it feels both refreshing and indulgent.

提案: 문법 시제와 표현이 혼동되어 있고 단어 선택이 부정확합니다('I'd like' 대신 'I liked', 'spicy thing' → 'spicy foods'). 예로 든 단어들('tacoki', 'product Pokémon')가 불분명해 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 이유 제시는 중요하므로 연결어로 이유를 명확히 하고, 구체적인 음식 이름이나 상황을 정확하게 말하세요. 2~3문장으로 간결하게 정리하고 발음·어휘를 정확히 사용하면 점수가 오릅니다.

例: When I was young, I liked spicy foods, such as kimchi stew and spicy noodles. I enjoyed them because the heat felt exciting and helped me relax after a long day at school.

提案: 문법(주어-동사 일치, 시제 일관성)과 문장 완결성이 부족합니다('I, uh, eats' → 'I eat', sentence trailing off). 질문에 대한 직접적 답변을 주제문으로 말한 뒤, 계절별로 구체적 예를 하나씩 들어 연결어(for example, in winter, in summer 등)를 사용하세요. 현재와 과거 비교를 명확히 하고 문장을 완성하세요.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer cold desserts and fresh fruits, while in winter I often choose hot, spicy soups to stay warm.

提案: 답변은 간단하고 직접적이지만 문법과 표현의 자연스러움이 부족합니다('a spicy food' → 'spicy food', 'From now on' → 'Now' 또는 'these days'). 이유나 한두 가지 구체적 변화(예: 어떤 음식에서 어떤 음식으로 왜 바뀌었는지)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다. 연결어(However, now 등)를 사용해 비교를 명확히 하세요.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred spicy dishes like kimchi and hot noodles, but now I prefer sweet foods such as cakes and pastries because my taste has mellowed over time.

× My favorite food is strawberry cake because I love sweet things and strawberry cake is one of the most sweetest in the world.

✓ My favorite food is strawberry cake because I love sweet things and strawberry cake is one of the sweetest in the world.

The phrase 'the most sweetest' is incorrect because 'sweetest' is already the superlative form; adding 'most' is redundant. Use either 'the sweetest' or 'most sweet' (preferably 'the sweetest'). Also, 'strawberry cake' as a general favorite does not require an article here. Suggestion: remove 'most' and keep 'the sweetest' to make a correct superlative. (문법 유형: 17)

× When I was young I'd like to eat spicy thing such as tacoki and product Pokémon or something.

✓ When I was young I liked to eat spicy things such as tteokbokki and Pokémon snacks or something.

Errors: 'I'd like' (would like) is inappropriate for past habitual action; use past tense 'I liked'. 'Spicy thing' should be plural 'spicy things' when speaking generally. 'tacoki' likely refers to 'tteokbokki' and 'product Pokémon' is unclear; 'Pokémon snacks' fits better. Also use 'to eat' for the infinitive after 'liked'. Suggestion: use past tense and pluralize countable nouns. (문법 유형: 1)

× Umm because it make me stress out during a long day.

✓ Umm because it made me stressed out during a long day.

'It make' is incorrect for past tense; subject-verb agreement and tense require 'made'. 'Stress out' as a verb is fine but when describing a resulting state use 'stressed out'. Also match past time frame with past tense. Suggestion: use 'made me stressed out' for clarity. (문법 유형: 27)

× Yeah, I, uh, eats different foods, uh, different time of the year.

✓ Yeah, I, uh, eat different foods at different times of the year.

'I eats' is incorrect: with subject 'I' the verb should be 'eat' (no -s). Also add preposition 'at' and plural 'times' for recurring occasions. Suggestion: use base verb with 'I' and include correct preposition and plural noun. (문법 유형: 27)

× For example, when I was young, I like spice food, but from now on I like sweet things and.

✓ For example, when I was young, I liked spicy food, but now I like sweet things.

Mixing past and present: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'liked'. 'Spice food' should be 'spicy food'. 'From now on' can be replaced with 'now' for current preference. Remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and correct adjective form. (문법 유형: 5)

× Oh definitely yes. When I was young I liked a spicy food. From now on I like sweet things.

✓ Oh, definitely yes. When I was young I liked spicy food. Now I like sweet things.

'A spicy food' is incorrect because 'food' in this general sense is uncountable; use 'spicy food' without 'a'. 'From now on' is awkward in this context; 'now' is simpler. Also add commas for natural speech. Suggestion: treat 'food' as uncountable when speaking generally and match tense. (문법 유형: 22)