Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сосредоточьтесь на ясном и кратком ответе: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте паразитных слов («uh») и повтора. Используйте правильную грамматику (e.g., "is prepared"), согласование единственного/множественного числа и лексически подходящие слова.

例: My favorite food is pizza. It is an Italian dish typically made with a thin crust topped with tomato sauce, cheese and various toppings such as mushrooms or pepperoni. I especially like it with extra cheese because it tastes richer.

提案: Начинайте с прямого ответа и давайте одно связное предложение с конкретной информацией. Уделите внимание правильной форме прошедшего времени и произношению названий блюд. Уберите повторы и используйте связки (for example, especially) правильно.

例: When I was a child, I liked plov, a traditional Uzbek dish made with rice, carrots and meat. I especially enjoyed it at weddings because it always tasted special and was served in large portions.

提案: Дайте конкретный пример и объясните причину сезонности или предпочтения. Избегайте перечисления непонятных названий и говорите связно: используйте linking words (for example, in summer, during holidays). Также используйте правильную лексику вместо неверных названий брендов или блюд.

例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and grilled fish, while in winter I eat more hot soups and stews. I also sometimes eat fast food like KFC when I am busy, but I try to choose healthier options the rest of the year.

提案: Отвечайте прямо и логично: начните с короткого "Yes" или "No", затем объясните причину изменения вкусов. Убирайте бессвязные фразы и исправляйте слова (sweet, savory, spicy). Дайте 1–2 конкретных примера, почему вы изменили предпочтения (здоровье, привыкание к новым блюдам).

例: Yes, my preferences have changed. As a child I liked sweet foods and desserts, but now I prefer savory and spicy dishes because I want healthier meals and more variety in flavours.

× Pizza is uh, Italian traditional foods and uh, pizza prepare with uh, with cheese and other other ingredients.

✓ Pizza is an Italian traditional food and is prepared with cheese and other ingredients.

The noun 'foods' should be singular 'food' when referring to pizza as a type of food. Missing article 'an' before 'Italian traditional food'. Passive construction needs 'is prepared'. Remove repeated word 'other'. Suggestion: use 'Pizza is an Italian traditional food and is prepared with cheese and other ingredients.'

× When I was child, I like plow.

✓ When I was a child, I liked plov.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and plural/tense: 'like' should be past 'liked' to match 'When I was a child'. Also the dish name is commonly spelled 'plov'. Suggestion: use past tense and include the article.

× Plow is uh, and Uzbek dish made dish made with carrot and rice, uh, I especially like.

✓ Plov is an Uzbek dish made with carrots and rice, which I especially like.

Use article 'an' before 'Uzbek dish'. 'Made dish made' is a repetition; use single 'made'. 'Carrot' should be plural 'carrots' when referring to ingredients generally. Add relative pronoun 'which' to connect clause. Suggestion: 'Plov is an Uzbek dish made with carrots and rice, which I especially like.'

× Weddings plough.

✓ I especially like plov served at weddings.

Original fragment lacks structure and correct preposition. Use 'at weddings' to indicate occasion and add subject 'I especially like' to make a complete sentence. Also correct spelling 'plov'. Suggestion: 'I especially like plov served at weddings.'

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of year, especially fast food such as KFC Airways, Octopus lavage and others I like.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year, especially fast food such as KFC, Octopus Lavash and others that I like.

Missing article 'the' in 'different times of the year'. Brand/food names need correct forms: 'KFC' and likely 'Octopus Lavash' (or 'octopus lavash'). Add relative clause 'that I like' for clarity. Suggestion: include 'the' and correct food names.

× I like KFC more.

✓ I prefer KFC.

'I like KFC more' is understandable but 'I prefer KFC' is a more natural comparative expression. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for clarity.

× I use a tool of sweet foods as a kite, but our time my tests change it because I began to prefer savory and species dishes for health reasons.

✓ I used to eat a lot of sweet foods, but over time my tastes changed because I began to prefer savory and spiced dishes for health reasons.

Original has multiple errors: 'use a tool' should be 'used to' to indicate past habit. 'Sweet foods as a kite' is incorrect — likely 'a lot'. 'Our time' -> 'over time'. 'My tests change it' should be 'my tastes changed'. 'Savory and species' should be 'savory and spiced'. Use past tense 'used to' and past 'changed' to match timeline. Suggestion: 'I used to eat a lot of sweet foods, but over time my tastes changed because I began to prefer savory and spiced dishes for health reasons.'

× And where is he?

✓ (Remove or clarify)

This question 'And where is he?' is unrelated and unclear in context. If the student meant to ask 'And what about you?' or 'And what about that?', it should be rewritten. Suggestion: remove the sentence or replace with a context-appropriate question such as 'What about you?'.