Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when/why you like it). Avoid repetition and apologising. Use linking words like "because" or "especially when" to connect ideas.

例: My favourite food is a burger with an egg. I especially enjoy it when I go out to eat with my family because the warm egg and juicy patty taste comforting, and our family always has fun sharing meals together.

提案: Answer directly and give clear supporting details. Use past tense consistently for childhood. Explain specific memories or reasons rather than vague time references. Use linking words like "because" or "when".

例: When I was young, I liked pizza a lot. I remember having pizza for dinner around seven or eight o'clock, and I loved it because everyone smiled and enjoyed the meal, which made eating pizza feel special.

提案: Be specific about how your diet changes with the seasons and avoid vague or poetic phrases. Use concrete examples and link reasons using words like "because" or "so". Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences and check grammar (subject-verb agreement).

例: Yes, I eat different foods during the year. For example, I eat more fresh fruits and salads in summer because they are refreshing, and I prefer soups and stews in winter because they keep me warm.

提案: Give a clear direct answer and explain how and why your preferences changed. Use correct tense and simpler sentence structure. Avoid repetitive phrases and clarify the timeline of changes. Provide one specific example of a food you liked before and what you like now.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. As a child I often liked pizza, but now I usually prefer a burger with an egg because I enjoy the flavors and textures more than I did before.

× My favorite food is burger with egg.

✓ My favorite food is a burger with an egg.

The sentence needs the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun 'burger' and 'an' before 'egg'. Use 'a burger' and 'an egg' to indicate one item. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns (a/an).

× I love burger with egg with all my life when we go out in with my family and when we go eating with the restaurant I I love to pick burger with eggs.

✓ I have loved burgers with eggs all my life when we go out with my family and when we eat at restaurants I like to choose a burger with eggs.

This sentence has multiple issues: tense and structure. 'With all my life' should be 'all my life' and present perfect 'have loved' shows continuous preference. 'Burgers' plural is natural for general preference. Use 'go out with my family' and 'eat at restaurants' (correct preposition). 'Pick' is informal; 'choose' is better. Remove repeated 'I'. Suggest breaking into shorter sentences and using present perfect for long-term habits. Grammar problems addressed: article use, pluralization, prepositions, tense, sentence structure.

× Sorry with my English I couldn't understand it also.

✓ Sorry about my English; I couldn't understand it either.

Use 'about' with 'sorry' and 'either' instead of 'also' in negative sentences. 'I couldn't understand it' is fine. Suggestion: 'Sorry about my English; I couldn't understand it either.'

× When I was young, the food that I like is pizza.

✓ When I was young, the food that I liked was pizza.

The time clause 'When I was young' sets past time, so verbs should be in past tense: 'liked' and 'was'. Maintain past tense consistency for past habits or states.

× Uh, maybe around 7:00 or 8:00.

✓ Uh, maybe around 7:00 or 8:00 in the evening.

Add a time-of-day phrase ('in the evening') to clarify the context; otherwise the sentence is grammatically acceptable but ambiguous. Suggest specifying time period for clarity.

× I love seeing people eating with pizza with the joy in their faces.

✓ I love seeing people eating pizza with joy on their faces.

Do not use 'with' before 'pizza' or 'the joy in their faces'. Correct prepositions: 'eating pizza' and 'joy on their faces'. This streamlines the phrase and makes it idiomatic.

× That's why I love eating pizza.

✓ That's why I love eating pizza.

This sentence is correct. It describes a general present preference, so present tense 'love' is appropriate.

× Yes, I eat different food at different times of the year because when you eat something new, your taste buds can feels like joyful gallery.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because when you eat something new, your taste buds can feel like a joyful gallery.

Use plural 'foods' for variety. 'Taste buds' plural is fine; the verb should be 'feel' not 'feels' to agree with plural subject. Add article 'a' before 'joyful gallery', though the metaphor is odd; alternatively use 'a joyful experience'. Suggestion: '...your taste buds can feel like a joyful gallery' or better '...your taste buds can feel delighted.'

× Yes, my favorite food chain since when I was a child because everything I eat, I love the food that that they serve me and that's why that's why when my favorite food is burger with an egg change every time when I taste something new.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child because I love the food that they serve me, and that's why my favorite food, such as a burger with an egg, changes every time I taste something new.

Use present perfect 'has changed' with 'since' to describe change from past to present. Remove redundant words and fix subject-verb agreement: 'my favorite food...changes' and 'I taste' (present simple for repeated events). Use articles 'a burger' and correct word order. Suggest simplifying long sentence into clearer clauses and using present perfect for changes over time.