Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên sửa ngữ pháp (số ít/đại từ, thì), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, và tránh lặp ý. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: sửa "they are" thành "it is", "she love" thành "she loves", và "we eating" thành "we ate". Giữ câu ngắn tối đa 3–4 câu, nêu lý do rồi dẫn vào kỷ niệm ngắn.

例: My favourite food is chicken because it tastes delicious. I also associate it with my best friend, who loved chicken too, so we often shared meals together when we were children. That memory makes chicken feel comforting to me.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý chính tả và viết hoa đúng (không cần viết Chili hoa), và sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ (đại từ, thì). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể hơn về món ăn hoặc kết quả của việc ăn cay (ví dụ bị đau bụng) sẽ làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Sử dụng liên từ như "however" để nối ý.

例: When I was young, I loved spicy food and used to sprinkle chili on almost everything. My parents warned me that too much spice could upset my stomach, however I would still eat it because I liked the strong flavour.

提案: Cần chỉnh thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ "in summer" và "in winter", "I usually eat"). Hoàn thiện câu cuối để diễn đạt rõ cảm giác (ví dụ "makes me feel warmer/comfortable"). Thêm một liên từ như "however" hoặc "whereas" để so sánh hai mùa. Giữ không quá 3 câu.

例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For instance, in summer I prefer ice cream, whereas in winter I usually eat chicken soup because it makes me feel warm and comforted.

提案: Câu có lỗi nghiêm trọng về nội dung ("success" không hợp lý) và ngữ pháp. Sửa nội dung cho hợp lý (nêu món trước kia), dùng thì hoàn chỉnh, và kết thúc ý rõ ràng. Thêm lý do cụ thể vì sao thay đổi (ví dụ thay đổi khẩu vị, sức khỏe). Giữ câu ngắn 2–3 câu.

例: When I was a child, my favourite food was spicy snacks, but now I prefer chicken soup. It makes me feel better when I'm sick, and as I grew older I began to value comforting, healthy meals more.

× My favorite food is chicken because they are so delicious.

✓ My favorite food is chicken because it is so delicious.

Subject 'chicken' when referred to as a type of food is treated as singular/uncountable; use singular pronoun 'it' and singular verb 'is'. Suggestion: refer to 'chicken' as 'it' or say 'chickens are' when meaning individual pieces.

× Well I love chicken because they remind me of my best friend because she love eating chicken too.

✓ Well, I love chicken because it reminds me of my best friend because she loves eating chicken too.

Two errors: pronoun and verb agreement. 'Chicken' (type) takes singular pronoun 'it' and singular verb 'reminds'. Also third person singular 'she' requires 'loves' not 'love'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and person.

× When we were young we eating chicken together.

✓ When we were young we ate chicken together.

After 'we were young' the past simple 'ate' is required; 'we eating' is incorrect because a finite past verb is needed. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? ... Well, my parents always told me that Chili's not good for me, but I didn't care.

✓ Well, my parents always told me that chili is not good for me, but I didn't care.

Reported speech with past 'told' can keep the present tense 'is' if it's a general truth; also 'Chili's' incorrectly uses apostrophe and capitalization. Suggestion: use 'chili is' for general statements and avoid unnecessary apostrophes.

× For instance, I prefer eating ice cream on summer but on winter I usually eating chicken soup because it's make me feel more.

✓ For instance, I prefer eating ice cream in summer but in winter I usually eat chicken soup because it makes me feel better.

Multiple tense and preposition issues: use 'in summer/in winter' not 'on', 'usually eat' (not 'usually eating') for habitual action, and 'it makes' (third person singular). 'Make me feel more' is unnatural; use 'makes me feel better'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for seasons and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: My favorite food when I was a child is definitely success, but now I prefer eating chicken soup.

✓ My favorite food when I was a child was definitely something else, but now I prefer eating chicken soup.

The original 'is definitely success' is ungrammatical: tense inconsistency and wrong noun 'success'. Use past tense 'was' to match 'when I was a child' and replace 'success' with appropriate phrase like 'something else' or the actual food. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct noun.

× It's make me feel better when I'm sick.

✓ It makes me feel better when I'm sick.

Third person singular subject 'it' requires 'makes' not 'make'. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement for present simple.

× Well I think my taste had a chance when I.

✓ Well, I think my taste changed when I grew up.

Original sentence is incomplete and incorrect: 'had a chance when I' is ungrammatical. Use a complete past-event clause like 'changed when I grew up' or 'changed as I got older'. Suggestion: complete the clause with a subject and verb that convey the intended meaning.