Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer names the food and gives a reason, but it lacks natural phrasing, specificity and conciseness. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g. "rice and curry", "traditional food in my country"). Add one or two specific details (flavour, how it's served) and use a linking phrase to make it coherent.

例: My favourite food is rice and curry because it's a traditional dish in my country. I especially like the spicy coconut curry my mother makes; the combination of tender meat and fragrant spices is really comforting.

提案: This answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence about what you liked, then give a specific example and a brief reason. Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance" and avoid unrelated numbers or repetitions.

例: When I was young, I loved sweet foods. For example, I often ate chocolate and candy because I enjoyed the sweet taste and the treats my parents gave me on special occasions.

提案: Your reply is basic and disorganized with filler words. Give a clear topic sentence, then specific examples of seasonal foods or occasions (festivals, harvests) and use linking words like "for example" or "in winter" to structure the answer.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during festivals we eat rich dishes like biryani and sweets, while in summer I prefer light meals such as salads and grilled fish.

提案: The answer is short, contains awkward phrasing and offers no specific information. State clearly whether it changed, explain how and why with a specific example, and use linking words like "because" or "so" to make it coherent.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was little I preferred sweets and snacks, but now I prefer savoury dishes like rice and curry because I appreciate stronger flavours and healthier meals.

× My favorite food is rice and Curry because it is in traditional food in our country.

✓ My favorite food is rice and curry because it is a traditional food in our country.

The sentence misuses the definite article and capitalization. 'Curry' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. The phrase 'in traditional food' is incorrect; use the indefinite article 'a' before 'traditional food' to indicate one example of food in the country. Suggestion: use 'a traditional food' to show that rice and curry are an example of traditional cuisine. Grammar problem type id: 17

× I cannot Remember Remember that 8 because I think all kids like to eat sweet chocolate then me also.

✓ I cannot remember that from when I was eight because I think all kids like to eat sweet chocolate, and I did too.

This sentence has several structure and tense issues. 'Remember' is repeated and needs lowercase. 'that 8' likely refers to age: use 'when I was eight'. Use past tense 'did' to match 'when I was a child'. Conjunctions should be 'and' rather than 'then' to join clauses. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to a clear clause mentioning age and use past tense for childhood habits. Grammar problem type id: 26

× Yes, actually of course we are going to outside and parties uh otherwise things then we eat different different types food.

✓ Yes, actually, of course we go out to parties and other events, and we eat different types of food then.

Incorrect preposition 'to outside' — use 'go out' or 'go outside'. 'Going to outside' is ungrammatical. 'Otherwise things' should be 'other events' or 'other occasions'. Plural noun 'types' requires 'of' after it: 'types of food'. Use simple present 'we go' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'go out to parties' or 'go to parties' and 'types of food'. Grammar problem type id: 11

× Yes, of course that's changed it. Why I am not a child now.

✓ Yes, of course it has changed because I am not a child now.

The original uses incorrect word order and auxiliary placement. 'That's changed it' is awkward; use present perfect 'it has changed' to indicate change since childhood. 'Why I am not a child now' is a fragment; combine with 'because' and place subject before verb: 'because I am not a child now.' Suggestion: use 'it has changed because...' and keep clause order subject-verb. Grammar problem type id: 26