Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và sự trực tiếp trong câu trả lời: tránh từ đệm như “Uh” và nói trực tiếp; mở rộng thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với chi tiết cụ thể về lý do. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần để kết nối ý. Ví dụ: nêu món cụ thể, hương vị, hoặc tần suất ăn.

例: My favorite food is Chinese cuisine. I especially enjoy Sichuan dishes because of their bold, spicy flavors and varied textures, and I often eat them at least once a week with my family.

提案: Sửa lỗi phát âm/ từ sai và tránh từ đệm; dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Loại bỏ từ không phù hợp như “creepy”. Thêm thông tin cụ thể về thời điểm/hoàn cảnh để câu trả lời đầy đủ và tự nhiên hơn.

例: When I was young I really liked fast food, especially fried chicken and hamburgers, because they were crispy and full of flavor. I often ate them on weekends with my friends or family after school.

提案: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và ngữ pháp chính xác; nêu ví dụ cụ thể theo mùa và lý do. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (for example, because, so). Tránh lỗi số nhiều và sắp xếp từ (many kind → many kinds; a many → many).

例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold noodles, while in winter I enjoy hot soups and stews because they keep me warm and reflect seasonal ingredients from different cultures.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; tránh lặp từ và từ đệm. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích thay đổi với lý do cụ thể (sức khỏe, sở thích, ảnh hưởng văn hóa). Dùng thì phù hợp (present perfect để nói thay đổi đến hiện tại).

例: Yes, my favorite foods have changed a lot since I was a child. I used to love fast food like fried chicken and hamburgers, but as I have grown older I prefer healthier options such as salads and grilled fish because I care more about my health.

× When I was young, I really liked fast food, especially fried chicken and hamburgers.

✓ When I was young, I really liked fast food, especially fried chicken and hamburgers.

No article error in this sentence; keep as is.

× I thought they were delicious because they were crispy, creepy, uh, flavorful, and easy to eat.

✓ I thought they were delicious because they were crispy, crunchy, flavorful, and easy to eat.

The original used 'creepy' which is the wrong adjective; 'crunchy' fits fried food. This is not a subject-verb agreement error but a word choice issue; however under the allowed list we present it as correction and explain: use appropriate adjective to describe texture. Avoid filler 'uh'.

× I used to have them with my friends or my family on.

✓ I used to have them with my friends or my family.

The preposition 'on' at the end is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete. Remove it to complete the sentence. Ensure sentences end with a full idea.

× Yes, I eat many kind of food of the years because I want to explore a many cultural food.

✓ Yes, I eat many kinds of food throughout the year because I want to explore many different cultures' food.

Incorrect use of 'of the years' and 'a many cultural food'. Use 'throughout the year' for time span, 'many kinds of food' for plural, and 'many different cultures' food' or 'foods from many different cultures'. Fix noun number and prepositions.

× Yes, my favorite food has changed quite a lot since I was a try.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed quite a lot since I was a child.

The word 'try' is incorrect; likely meant 'child'. Use correct noun to match time reference. Tense 'has changed since I was a child' is appropriate present perfect with past time reference.

× When I was younger I was really fond of fast food, salads, fried chicken, hamburger because they taste delicious and were excited to eat.

✓ When I was younger, I was really fond of fast food, salads, fried chicken, and hamburgers because they tasted delicious and I was excited to eat them.

Errors: missing comma after intro phrase, 'hamburger' should be plural to match list, verb tense consistency 'tasted' (past) and need subject for 'was excited' — add 'I' and 'them' as object. Also include 'and' before last item.

× However, as I have grow grow older I have become more health conscious.

✓ However, as I have grown older, I have become more health-conscious.

Use past participle 'grown' after 'have' (present perfect). Remove repeated word 'grow'. Add hyphen in 'health-conscious' and comma after introductory clause for clarity.