Food— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite food?
受験者
Oh this is so trick question because I got too many things that I like to eat. Umm but like 2 for the general. I more prefer to eat noodles, not rice.
試験官
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
受験者
Umm, when I was young I think my favorite food also be the sweet things like cakes and some uh, dessert. Uh, I think one of my favorite food when I was young is to eating the mooncakes. So every mid autumn festival I will really hoping to eat.
試験官
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
受験者
Umm, yeah, I think of course also there is a different festival in China that will let us to eating different type of food. Food like what I said before, umm the me autumn moon cakes you will eat and during the the New Year's festival we were eating dumplings.
試験官
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
受験者
Yeah, of course I think my favorite will always changing now like last year I don't accept that to eating too much vegetable. But now my favorite food most of it is connecting with vegetable like lettuce and tomato things that will not eating one of the when I was a child.
評価
総合
Part 1
What is your favourite food?
スコア: 58.0提案: 回答要更直接并且更简洁，避免犹豫语气和重复。开头先给出主题句（直接回答喜欢的食物），然后用1–2句具体说明原因或举例，使用连接词使表达连贯。例如说明喜欢面的口感、做法或常吃的菜式。注意语法（prefer to eat noodles → I prefer noodles to rice）。
例: My favourite food is noodles. I prefer noodles to rice because they come in many varieties and absorb flavours well. For example, I often enjoy spicy Sichuan noodle dishes or a simple bowl of chicken noodle soup when I’m busy.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
スコア: 62.0提案: 回答需要更正语法并提供更具体的细节。先直接回答（I liked sweet foods），然后用连接词给出具体例子（for example）并说明原因或情感（why you liked them, memories）。避免口头语（um, uh）并注意时态和结构（e.g. I liked → correct, to eating → eating）。
例: When I was young I loved sweet foods, especially cakes and traditional desserts. For example, I always looked forward to eating mooncakes during the Mid-Autumn Festival because my family would share them and we enjoyed the different flavours together.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答要结构清晰，先给出总述（Yes, I do），再用连接词列举具体节日和对应食物，并说明原因或习俗。减少重复并修正用词（the Mid-Autumn mooncakes, we eat dumplings at New Year）。可以补充个人感受或频率以丰富内容。
例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during the Mid-Autumn Festival we traditionally eat mooncakes, while at Chinese New Year my family always makes dumplings. These foods are linked to celebrations and family gatherings.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答要更有条理并使用正确时态。先直接回答（Yes/No），然后说明如何变化并给出具体例子（以前喜欢甜食，现在更喜欢蔬菜），用连接词（however, now）解释原因（health, taste)并避免语法错误（e.g. my favourite food has changed, I didn't used to eat vegetables）。
例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since I was a child. I used to prefer sweets and mooncakes, but now I enjoy vegetables like lettuce and tomatoes more because I try to eat healthier and I like their fresh flavours.
文法
× Oh this is so trick question because I got too many things that I like to eat.
✓ Oh, this is such a tricky question because I have too many things I like to eat.
问题类型：17 / 26（定冠词/句子结构） 说明：原句中缺少逗号且搭配错误：英文习惯说“such a tricky question”而不是“so trick question”；“I got”用于口语但不正式，应改为现在完成/现在时的“I have”或“I like many things”。建议使用“such a tricky question”并把“got”换成“have”。（简体中文）
× Umm but like 2 for the general.
✓ Umm, but I have two in general.
问题类型：27（主谓一致/句子结构） 说明：原句结构不完整且表意不清。“2”应写作“two”，并且需要主语和动词，改为“I have two in general”更符合英语表达。（简体中文）
× I more prefer to eat noodles, not rice.
✓ I prefer to eat noodles rather than rice.
问题类型：26（句子结构） 说明：原句中“more prefer”是重复比较的错误，动词“prefer”本身已含比较意味，应直接用“prefer A to B”或“prefer A rather than B”。建议改写为“I prefer to eat noodles rather than rice”。（简体中文）},{
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