Food— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite food?
受験者
Well, my favorite breakfast is Vietnamese cuisine because I am a Vietnamese people and I am so familiar with every Vietnamese disease. Especially enjoy fresh spring rolls because of their fraction of and the balance of sweets.
試験官
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
受験者
When I were a child, I was really fond of fried rice that my mom made. She often fried rice to save time and I love it because it was tasty and comforting, especially with a little soy shots and vegetables.
試験官
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
受験者
Well, I guess no, because nowadays with the development of technology, the food, vegetables and meat are produced every time in the years.
試験官
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
受験者
What do some extent I would say yes. For example, some first like for fries, fries a year to laugh very much when I was a judge, but now I do not fond of it anymore.
評価
総合
Part 1
What is your favourite food?
スコア: 42.0提案: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng và tổ chức ý rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi từ vựng sai (ví dụ 'disease' sai thành 'dish'), dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và tối đa 3-4 câu hỗ trợ. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp mô tả hương vị và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'familiar with', 'fresh spring rolls', 'balance of flavours'). Nên dùng liên từ khi mở rộng (e.g., 'because', 'for example').
例: My favourite food is Vietnamese cuisine, especially fresh spring rolls. I grew up eating them, so I'm familiar with the flavours. I like them because they taste fresh and have a good balance of sweet and savoury. For breakfast, they feel light but satisfying.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
スコア: 55.0提案: Cần sửa thì và cấu trúc câu (ví dụ 'When I was a child'). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó đưa chi tiết cụ thể (thành phần, lý do). Tránh từ sai ('soy shots' -> 'soy sauce') và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., 'because', 'especially'). Giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu để tự nhiên hơn.
例: When I was a child, my favourite food was my mother’s fried rice. She often made it because it was quick and practical. I loved it because it was tasty and comforting, especially with a little soy sauce and mixed vegetables.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
スコア: 48.0提案: Ý tưởng ổn nhưng diễn đạt cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh cấu trúc lủng củng ('produced every time in the years'). Nên nói trực tiếp ('Not really') rồi giải thích cụ thể bằng ví dụ hoặc ngắn gọn (ví dụ: availability in supermarkets, imported goods). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp ('year-round', 'seasonal', 'available').
例: Not really. Most foods are available year-round now, thanks to modern farming and imports. However, I still enjoy seasonal fruits when they taste best, like mangoes in summer.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
スコア: 35.0提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng 'Yes' hoặc 'No' và giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng lớn ('To some extent, I would say yes'; 'I used to like fries a lot when I was young, but now I am not fond of them'). Tránh câu không có nghĩa. Dùng 2-3 câu: câu nhận định + lý do/ ví dụ.
例: To some extent, yes. I used to love french fries a lot when I was younger because they were tasty and convenient. Now I prefer healthier options, so I don't eat fries as often.
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