Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence stating your favourite food, correct grammar, and keep it concise (1-2 sentences). Use a linking phrase to add one specific detail about why you like it (taste, convenience, health). Avoid redundancy and fix verb forms (e.g., "I am" / "I eat").

例: My favourite food is sandwiches because they are healthy and quick to make. For example, I usually have a whole-grain sandwich with turkey, lettuce, and tomato for lunch because it keeps me full and energized.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence about what you liked as a child, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Use correct tense (past simple) and avoid long, unclear sentences.

例: When I was young, I liked to eat junk food such as fried snacks and sweets. I ate these because they tasted good and were easy to get, but now I prefer healthier options.

提案: Answer directly (Yes/No) and follow with a concise explanation and a clear example. Use correct expressions for frequency and seasons. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "however" or "for example."

例: Not really, but sometimes I change what I eat depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer warm, spicy North Indian dishes, while in summer I choose lighter South Indian meals such as idli and sambar.

提案: Give a clear yes/no answer, then briefly explain why with one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar and a natural structure (subject-verb agreement). Keep it to 2 sentences maximum.

例: No, my favourite food is still sandwiches because my parents encouraged healthy eating when I was young. I still enjoy them for their taste and convenience, so my preference hasn't changed.

× As I am very conscious person, I take the healthy food.

✓ As I am a very health-conscious person, I eat healthy food.

Missing article before 'very conscious person' and incorrect adjective order and form. 'health-conscious' is the correct compound adjective; 'a' is required before a singular countable noun. Use 'eat healthy food' (verb 'eat' not 'take'). Suggestion: Add the article 'a', use the compound adjective 'health-conscious', and use the verb 'eat' for food.

× Usually my favorite food is take a sandwich.

✓ Usually my favorite food is a sandwich.

Unnecessary use of base verb 'take' after 'is'. The structure 'my favorite food is a sandwich' requires a noun complement, not a verb. Remove 'take' and include the article 'a'. Suggestion: State preferences using 'is' + noun (a sandwich).

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?

This question is already correct. No change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× That we all know when we are young we always like to eat oily food or a junk food because it's our habit not but it is appropriate at that level but not at that time.

✓ When we are young, we often like to eat oily or junk food because it is a habit; it may seem appropriate at that age but not later.

Original sentence is confused and contains redundant and misplaced phrases. Reorder for clarity: place time clause first, use 'often' for frequency, remove extra articles ('a junk food' -> 'junk food'), and replace awkward contrast with 'it may seem appropriate at that age but not later.' Suggestion: Use clearer clause order, correct articles, and concise contrast words.

× We are a child and younger we cannot understand that.

✓ As children, we cannot understand that when we are young.

Subject-verb agreement and noun choice: 'We are a child' is incorrect because 'child' is singular; use plural 'children' or the phrase 'as children'. Also rephrase time reference for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural noun 'children' or phrase 'as children' and place time adverbial correctly.

× But now I will eat best food but at younger I eat junk food.

✓ But now I eat better food; when I was younger I ate junk food.

Tense inconsistency and adjective form: 'will eat' is unnecessary for habitual present—use present 'eat'. 'Best food' is incorrect here; use comparative 'better food'. Also 'at younger' is incorrect phrase; use 'when I was younger'. Past action 'ate' for younger time. Suggestion: Use present tense for current habits, past tense for past habits, and correct adjective forms.

× Usually not, but I eat different food at different time on the year.

✓ Usually no, but I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Article and number errors: use 'no' rather than 'not' in short answers. 'Different food' should be plural 'different foods'. 'Different time on the year' should be 'different times of the year.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns for repeated items and correct prepositional phrase 'of the year'.

× But I usually change the different foods.

✓ But I usually change the foods I eat.

Redundant adjective 'different' with 'change' and unnatural word order. 'Change the different foods' is awkward; clarify that you change which foods you eat. Suggestion: Use clearer verb-object order and avoid redundant modifiers.

× For example I eat South Indian as well as North Indian but not at specific year.

✓ For example, I eat South Indian and North Indian dishes, but not in any specific season of the year.

Preposition and article errors: 'at specific year' is incorrect; use 'in any specific season' or 'at a specific time of the year.' Also specify 'dishes' for clarity and add commas. Suggestion: Use 'in' for time periods and add nouns like 'dishes' after cuisine adjectives.

× No, my favorite food is still sandwich because my father and mother is also take care of my health and I also take care of my health when I was young.

✓ No, my favorite food is still the sandwich because my father and mother also take care of my health, and I also took care of my health when I was young.

Missing article before 'sandwich'—use 'the sandwich' or 'sandwiches'. Subject-verb agreement: 'father and mother is' should be 'father and mother are' or 'my parents'. Verb tense: 'I also take care of my health when I was young' mixes present and past; use past 'took' for the young period. Also restructure for clarity and commas. Suggestion: Use 'my parents' or plural verb 'are', include definite/article for 'sandwich', and keep tense consistent.

× But there is no change in my favorite food. Sandwiches, my still favorite.

✓ There has been no change in my favorite food; sandwiches are still my favorite.

Awkward word order and tense: 'But there is no change' can be improved to 'There has been no change'. The fragment 'Sandwiches, my still favorite' is incorrect; rewrite as 'sandwiches are still my favorite.' Suggestion: Use complete sentence structure with correct verb form and natural word order.