Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, natural answer (one topic sentence) and then add one brief supporting detail. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding information.

例: My favourite food is sushi. I especially like salmon nigiri because the fish is fresh and the rice is lightly seasoned, which makes each bite balanced.

提案: Again you repeated or rephrased the question and changed words incorrectly. Answer directly about your childhood preferences, include a topic sentence and one supporting detail, and use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: When I was young I loved simple home-cooked meals, especially tomato pasta. For example, my mother often made spaghetti with a mild tomato sauce, which I still enjoy because it feels comforting.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a clear yes/no or frequency answer followed by a reason or example using a linking word like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year because seasonal produce influences our meals. For example, I eat more soups and root vegetables in winter, and more salads and fruits in summer.

提案: The answer is unintelligible and does not address the question. Give a clear response about whether your favourite food has changed, then briefly explain why or give an example. Use simple, accurate language.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood because I now enjoy trying new cuisines. For instance, I used to prefer plain chicken and rice, but now I love spicy Thai dishes because I appreciate bolder flavours.

× What is your favorite food?

✓ What is your favourite food?

The student repeated the examiner's question without needing to change tense or meaning. This is not a grammatical error in form, but it uses American spelling 'favorite' while the examiner used British 'favourite'. To match the examiner's form and maintain consistency, change spelling to 'favourite'. Suggestion: be consistent with British or American English spelling throughout the transcript.

× What kind of food did you like when you were there?

✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?

The pronoun or demonstrative 'there' is incorrect in context because the examiner asked about the listener's childhood, not a location. Replace 'there' with 'young' to refer to the time period. Suggestion: use time expressions (young, as a child) rather than place pronouns when describing past periods of life.

× Do you eat different foods at different time of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

The noun 'time' needs to be plural here because the expression refers to multiple occasions/seasons ('different times of the year'). Using the singular 'time' is incorrect. Suggestion: use the plural 'times' with 'different' for repeated occasions or seasons.

× Have your favorite food giant sign your grandchildren.

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

The student's reply is unrelated and contains several severe structure and word-choice errors (nonsensical sequence 'favorite food giant sign your grandchildren'). The examiner asked whether the favourite food has changed; the correct form is a present perfect question: 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' Also note subject-verb agreement: 'food' (singular) takes 'has'. Suggestion: answer directly using present perfect to indicate change over time and ensure subject-verb agreement and logical vocabulary.