Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and direct, but it is short and lacks supporting details and linking words. Extend your response with one or two specific details (e.g., what you like about pizza, favourite toppings or when you eat it) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

例: I really like pizza because of the crispy crust and melted cheese. For example, my favourite topping is pepperoni, and I usually eat it with friends on weekends.

提案: The response is unclear and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give a specific example of a dish your mother cooked and explain why you liked it, using linking words. Keep sentences simple and correct tense.

例: When I was young, I liked the meals my mother cooked, especially her chicken stew. It was comforting and flavorful, so I always asked her to make it for family dinners.

提案: Your answer is vague and contains grammar mistakes. Begin with a clear yes/no statement, then describe how your diet changes by season with a specific example and use linking words like "for example" or "in winter" to organize your answer.

例: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I prefer warm soups and stews, while in summer I choose light salads and cold dishes. I also like trying seasonal dishes at Thai restaurants with friends.

提案: You address the question but the answer is confusing and has awkward phrases. Start with a clear statement about change, then give a specific contrast between childhood preferences and current tastes, using linking words such as "however" or "nowadays".

例: Yes, my taste has changed. As a child I preferred simple foods like plain rice and boiled vegetables; however, nowadays I enjoy spicy dishes such as hot curries and chili noodles.

× When I was young, I like fire, I Cook Made my Mom Cook by my mom is very tasty and I really like it.

✓ When I was young, I liked food my mom made because my mom's cooking was very tasty and I really liked it.

The sentence refers to past time 'When I was young', so verbs should be in the past tense. 'like' should be 'liked', 'Cook Made my Mom Cook' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased to 'food my mom made'. Also possessive 'my mom's cooking' is needed. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense and use clear noun phrases.'},{