Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise, and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, correct noun forms, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. For example, say why you like it (taste, health, variety) and give a brief specific example (a dish) or experience.

例: My favourite food is Japanese cuisine. I particularly enjoy sushi and ramen because they are light, healthy and full of umami. For instance, I often choose salmon sushi for its fresh taste and soft texture, which makes me feel comfortable and satisfied.

提案: Answer directly with a topic sentence, use linking words to explain reasons, and avoid repetition. Correct small errors (e.g. 'especially', 'flavourful'). Give a short specific context (when/where you ate it) to make it more vivid.

例: When I was young I especially liked Thai food, particularly grilled pork with sticky rice. I liked it because it was very flavourful and convenient to eat on the go, so I often had it for breakfast before going to work.

提案: Be precise and avoid hesitation. Use correct words ('light' not 'live'), add a linking word to compare seasons, and finish your sentence fully. Provide one concrete example of a summer and winter dish.

例: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light meals such as salads and cold noodle dishes, while in winter I usually eat warm rice soup like congee because it makes me feel more comfortable and warm.

提案: Correct grammar and clarify the change with a clear timeline. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear words ('shooting'), and give a specific comparison and brief reason why the change happened.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to prefer fried rice, but now I enjoy noodle dishes more because I like their variety of flavours and textures.

× My favorite foods is uh, Japanese food, yes, for example, uh, sushi, learning and uh, unani.

✓ My favorite food is Japanese food, for example sushi, ramen and udon.

The noun phrase 'favorite foods' (plural) conflicts with the singular verb 'is'. Use singular 'favorite food' with singular verb. Also some food names were incorrect ('learning' -> 'ramen', 'unani' -> 'udon'). Keep parallel list without extra fillers. Suggestion: use singular noun when speaking of a single category and ensure verb agreement: 'My favorite food is...'.

× Yes, I like Japanese foods because Japanese food is the type is good for me.

✓ Yes, I like Japanese food because it is good for me.

Redundant and incorrect structure: 'Japanese food is the type is good for me' mixes noun phrases and verbs. Use a clear subject and predicate: 'it is good for me'. Also use 'Japanese food' (uncountable) consistently rather than 'Japanese foods'. Suggestion: simplify to a single clause: 'I like Japanese food because it is good for me.'

× I think Japanese food is comfort.

✓ I think Japanese food is comforting.

'Comfort' is a noun; here an adjective or participle is needed to describe food. Use adjective/participle 'comforting' to convey that it gives comfort. Suggestion: use 'comforting' or 'comfort food' depending on meaning: '...is comforting' or '...is comfort food.'

× When I was young I liked Thai food, specially grilled pork with sticky rice.

✓ When I was young I liked Thai food, especially grilled pork with sticky rice.

Spelling error 'specially' should be 'especially' to introduce a specific example. Tense 'liked' is correct. Suggestion: use 'especially' for emphasis when giving examples.

× I love it because it's what flavorful and easy to eat on the go.

✓ I loved it because it was flavorful and easy to eat on the go.

The original mixes present tense 'love' with past reference 'when I was young'. Use past tense 'loved' and 'was'. Remove 'what' which is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistency: 'I loved it because it was flavorful...'.

× And I like it too. And I like it it in the morning before I go to work.

✓ I also liked it in the morning before I went to work.

Repeat 'And I like it' is redundant; maintain past tense 'liked' for childhood. Typo 'it it' should be 'it'. Use past tense 'went' to match past context. Suggestion: combine and simplify: 'I also liked it in the morning before I went to work.'

× Yes I do. In summer I prefer live meals like uh salad and cool noodles, while in winter I eat warm rice soup because they make me feel more comfortable in the.

✓ Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light meals like salad and cold noodles, while in winter I eat warm rice soup because it makes me feel more comfortable.

'Live meals' is incorrect; should be 'light meals'. 'Cool noodles' -> 'cold noodles'. 'They make me feel' refers to 'rice soup' (singular) so use 'it makes me feel'. Remove trailing 'in the.' Maintain present tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'light', 'cold', and match subject-verb number.

× Yes, I has my favorite foods changed since I was a shooting, from fried rice to noodles.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child, from fried rice to noodles.

'I has' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'has' with third-person singular subject 'my favorite food'. Also sentence structure should be 'my favorite food has changed'. 'I was a shooting' is incorrect phrase; likely 'I was a child'. Use singular 'food' not 'foods'. Suggestion: restructure: 'Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.'