Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give a specific supporting detail with correct tense and collocations. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

例: My favourite food is Indian curry because I love the fragrant spices and rich flavours. For example, when I lived in Kyoto I used to eat at an Indian restaurant every week, trying different curries. This variety helped me appreciate regional spice blends and textures.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and more precise vocabulary. Use past tense consistently and give a specific example of a dish you liked, then contrast with present preferences using a linking word like "but" or "now".

例: When I was young I preferred salty foods, especially dishes seasoned with soy sauce such as grilled mackerel. However, now I prefer simpler seasonings like salt and a little lemon to taste the natural flavours of ingredients.

提案: Answer directly and use specific seasonal examples. Avoid vague statements like "life will be happier." Use linking phrases ("for example", "in winter", "in summer") and finish the sentence with a concrete detail.

例: Yes, I change my diet with the seasons. For example, in winter I eat root vegetables and hot soups to stay warm, while in summer I prefer salads and seasonal fruits like watermelon to stay cool.

提案: Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and give a clear contrast between past and present with specific examples. Keep it concise and use linking words such as "when" and "now".

例: Yes, my tastes have changed. When I was a child I mostly ate salty, simple dishes, but now I enjoy a wide variety of foods, including Indian curry and different Japanese dishes.

× My favorite food is Curry, especially Indian Curry, because the spice smells good and the taste is very exotic for me.

✓ My favorite food is curry, especially Indian curry, because the spices smell good and the taste is very exotic to me.

Use lowercase for common nouns like 'curry'. 'Spice' should be plural 'spices' to match context and must agree with the plural verb 'smell'. The phrase 'for me' is more natural as 'to me' when expressing a personal impression. Also avoid unnecessary capitalization of 'Curry' and 'Indian Curry'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, when I lived in Kyoto, I usually went to the Indian restaurant every week and enjoy various.

✓ For example, when I lived in Kyoto, I usually went to Indian restaurants every week and enjoyed a variety of dishes.

The clause mixes past ('lived', 'went') with present 'enjoy'. Change 'enjoy' to past 'enjoyed' for tense consistency. 'The Indian restaurant' implies a single place; use plural 'Indian restaurants' or 'an Indian restaurant'. 'Enjoy various' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoyed a variety of dishes'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I was young I liked to have salty dishes such as soy sauce or sauce because it tasted good for me, but now I like more simple seasoning.

✓ When I was young, I liked salty foods such as dishes with soy sauce because they tasted good to me, but now I prefer simpler seasonings.

'Salty dishes such as soy sauce or sauce' is unclear: soy sauce is a condiment, not a dish. Use 'salty foods' or 'dishes with soy sauce'. 'It tasted' should agree with plural 'foods' so use 'they tasted'. 'For me' is more natural as 'to me'. 'I like more simple seasoning' should be 'I prefer simpler seasonings' for natural comparative/quantifier and plural consistency. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Yes, I usually try to eat different foods at different seasons because life will be happier to do that.

✓ Yes, I usually try to eat different foods in different seasons because life is happier when I do that.

Use 'in different seasons' (preposition) instead of 'at'. The clause 'life will be happier to do that' is ungrammatical; the correct idea is 'life is happier when I do that' using present tense. Also 'when I do that' clarifies the subject of the action. Grammar problem type ID:6

× For example in winter I try to eat vegetables which is season in winter and also in summer I try to eat.

✓ For example, in winter I try to eat vegetables that are in season, and in summer I try to eat seasonal fruits and vegetables.

Add comma after 'For example'. Use 'in winter' and 'in summer' consistently. 'Vegetables which is season in winter' is wrong: use 'vegetables that are in season'. The second part 'I try to eat' is incomplete; specify what you eat in summer (e.g., 'seasonal fruits and vegetables'). Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, my favorite foods has changed a little bit.

✓ Yes, my favorite foods have changed a little bit.

Subject 'favorite foods' is plural so the verb must be plural 'have' not 'has'. Ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:27

× When I was a young I used to have salty food and try not to eat various dishes.

✓ When I was young, I used to eat salty foods and did not try to eat a variety of dishes.

Do not use the article 'a' before 'young' in this context; say 'When I was young'. 'Used to have salty food' is better as 'used to eat salty foods'. 'Try not to eat various dishes' is awkward and mixes tenses; use past 'did not try to eat a variety of dishes' to match 'used to'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× But now I try to eat a lot of kinds of food such as Indian Curry or Japanese.

✓ But now I try to eat many kinds of food such as Indian curry or Japanese dishes.

'A lot of kinds of food' is awkward; use 'many kinds of food'. 'Indian Curry' should be lowercase 'Indian curry'. 'Japanese' alone is incomplete; use 'Japanese dishes'. Also maintain parallel structure for examples. Grammar problem type ID:12