Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız net ama düzensiz ve tekrarlı. Konu cümlesi açık, ancak gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 1) Cümlenin yapısını basitleştirin: önce doğrudan cevap, sonra kısa destekleyici neden/örnek verin. 2) Gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın (ör. "because I enjoy it too" yerine bir neden). 3) Kelime sırasına ve çoğul/sahiplik uyumuna dikkat edin. 4) Cümle sayısını 2–3 cümle ile sınırlayın.

例: My favourite food is Makana. I enjoy it because it has a rich, spicy flavour and I often eat it with fresh salad, which balances the taste.

提案: Cevabınız anlaşılması zor ve dilbilgisi hataları çok fazla. 1) Önce doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun (ör. 'When I was young, I liked...'). 2) Destekleyici bir sebep veya örnek ekleyin. 3) Gereksiz ses ve duraklamalardan kaçının. 4) Basit geçmiş zaman kullanımı ile net ifadeler kurun.

例: When I was young, I liked potatoes, especially mashed potatoes. I loved them because they were warm and comforting, and my family often served them with gravy.

提案: Cevap mantıklı fakat karışık zaman kullanımı ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. 1) Soruyu doğrudan cevaplayın ve mevsimlere göre örnekler verin. 2) Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (şimdiki ve geçmişi karıştırmayın). 3) Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri akıcı hale getirin. 4) Örnekleri spesifikleştirin (hangi mevsim, hangi yiyecek).

例: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer fresh salads and fruit because they are refreshing, while in winter I often choose soups and stews to keep warm.

提案: Cevabınız kısa ve hatalı grammatik içeriyor. 1) Doğru soru formuna uygun kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun (Yes/No + açıklama). 2) Değişiklik varsa nedenini belirtin ve bir örnek verin. 3) "Has" yardımcı fiilinin kullanımına dikkat edin ve doğru zaman formunu kullanın.

例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to prefer simple dishes like mashed potatoes, but now I prefer soups because they are healthier and more varied.

× My favorite food is Makana because I enjoy it too. Makana and salad.

✓ My favorite food is Makana because I enjoy it. I also like salad.

The original has article/phrase misuse and sentence fragments. 'I enjoy it too. Makana and salad.' is awkward and partly incomplete. Correct by splitting into two complete sentences: state enjoyment of Makana and add 'I also like salad.' This fixes article/fragment issues and produces clear coordination.

× I did you like potato and. Talk when I was young, I like, uh, I liked because.

✓ When I was young, I liked potatoes and used to eat them often.

Original is ungrammatical and fragmented. 'I did you like potato and.' mixes auxiliary and object incorrectly. Use past simple 'liked' for a past habitual action and plural 'potatoes' for general reference. 'Used to' can show habitual past. Ensure subject, verb, and object are present and in correct order.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. Uh, for example, I like fresh salad when I was young, but I don't like now.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, I liked fresh salad when I was young, but I don't like it now.

Mixes past and present incorrectly. 'I like fresh salad when I was young' should use past 'liked' to match 'when I was young'. Add the pronoun 'it' after 'don't like' to complete the object. Maintain consistent tense and include necessary pronouns.

× I has soup change since I was a child.

✓ My favorite soup has changed since I was a child.

'I has' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'has' applies to third person singular. Use 'has changed' with a singular noun subject: 'My favorite soup has changed.' Alternatively, 'I have' could be used: 'I have changed my favorite soup' is awkward. Use correct subject and verb agreement and include clear subject 'favorite soup'.