Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、不自然な繰り返しや躊躇語（uh）が多く、文法もやや乱れています。トピックセンテンスを明確にし、余分なフィラーを減らし、現在習慣を示す副詞（e.g. usually, every evening）や頻度表現を使うと良いです。また一文で完結させ、必要なら2文目で短い補足を加えてください。例：主語＋動詞で始め、犬と散歩する目的や時間帯を具体的に述べる。

例: Yes. I usually walk every evening with my dog as part of my night routine, which helps both of us relax before bed.

提案: 過去の習慣を話す際に時制に注意（過去形）し、躊躇語を減らして流暢に答えましょう。理由を述べるのは良いので、もう少し具体的な活動や頻度を付け加えると説得力が増します。2文以内で完結に。

例: Not really. When I was a child, I rarely went for walks because I preferred playing football and other sports with my friends at the park almost every afternoon.

提案: 意味は伝わりますが語彙や文法の誤り（working→walking、make refresh）や繰り返しが目立ちます。理由を2つほど挙げ、接続詞（because, so, therefore）や具体例を使って論理的に繋げてください。また“relaxed”以外の表現（calm, refreshed）を使うと語彙が豊かに聞こえます。

例: I think people like walking in parks because it helps them relax and clear their minds after a busy day, and the green surroundings also make them feel refreshed and calm.

提案: 答えが曖昧で混乱しています（MMMが不明瞭）。仮定法の使い方はおおむね正しいが、目的地は明確にし、理由やどのくらい長く歩きたいかを付け加えると良いです。フィラーを減らし、一貫した表現で述べましょう。

例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk from my hotel to Tokyo Station because I want to see the city architecture and enjoy the atmosphere for several hours.

提案: 現在完了の使用は適切ですが、主語・代名詞の一致や動詞の形（have to lose weight, dislikes）に注意が必要です。犬の性別の混同も見られます。簡潔に1～2文で理由と頻度を明確にし、語彙を正確に使ってください。

例: Lately I have been walking around my neighborhood because my dog dislikes long walks and is gaining weight, so I need to exercise him more regularly.

× I guess I usually walk with my dog so it's, uh, my, uh, night routine.

✓ I guess I usually walk with my dog, so it's my nightly routine.

The sentence uses present simple correctly but has awkward phrasing and redundant pauses. Change 'night routine' to the adjective form 'nightly routine' for natural usage and add a comma before 'so'. Remove filler words.

× Uh, when I was a child, I, I don't often go for a walk, uh, because I preferred to play sports with my friends in a park.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't often go for walks because I preferred to play sports with my friends in the park.

The context is past, so use past tense 'didn't' not present 'don't'. Use plural 'walks' for habitual activity (or keep singular with article but plural is natural). Use 'the park' for a specific known park. Remove filler repetitions.

× Uh, I think the reason they like working in the park is that walking makes them feel relaxed, so they they have a busy day so they want to make refresh.

✓ I think the reason they like walking in the park is that walking makes them feel relaxed, especially after a busy day when they want to refresh themselves.

Use 'walking in the park' not 'working'. 'Make refresh' is incorrect—use the reflexive 'refresh themselves' or phrase 'to refresh'. Also fix repetition and add 'after a busy day' to clarify. Maintain gerund 'walking' as noun.

× Uh, if I, if I had time, I would go to the MMM. It's difficult, but I would say that I would like to go, uh, Tokyo station by walk.

✓ If I had time, I would go to the MMM. It's difficult, but I would like to go to Tokyo Station on foot.

Use 'go to Tokyo Station' (add preposition 'to' and capitalize proper noun). 'By walk' is incorrect; use 'on foot'. Remove redundant 'would' after 'I would say that'. Keep conditional consistent.

× Uh, yeah, I have, I have walked around my house lately because uh, my dog, my dog dislike walking but uh, he is getting fat so she uh, he have to reduce.

✓ Yes, I have walked around my house lately because my dog dislikes walking, but he is getting fat so he has to lose weight.

Use present perfect 'have walked' is fine, but subject-verb agreement requires 'dog dislikes' (third person singular). Pronoun confusion: choose 'he' consistently. 'He have to reduce' is ungrammatical; use 'he has to lose weight'. Avoid repetition and fillers.