Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更准确并纠正词汇与语法错误。避免重复（如 “walk walking”），并减少填充词“uh”。应有主题句，然后用1-2个具体理由支持，使用连词衔接，使表达更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I walk for about 10 to 15 minutes each morning or evening because I dislike a sedentary lifestyle. Walking helps me stretch my body and clear my mind, so I try to make it a daily habit.

提案: 注意时态和词汇使用（把“work”改为“walk”，把游戏名拼写正确）。回答应先直接回应问题，再给出具体例子并用连词连接。尽量用更自然的表达替代笼统判断。

例: Not really. I didn’t walk much as a child; instead, I spent time outdoors playing games like hide-and-seek with my friends. Kids usually prefer active games because walking alone can be boring.

提案: 结构清晰，但注意小语法错误（如“off offer”应为“offer”），并可加入更具体细节或例子来丰富回答。使用连接词（firstly, secondly, for example）使逻辑更紧密。

例: I think there are two main reasons. Firstly, parks provide a peaceful escape from stressful workplaces or schools, which helps people relax. Secondly, parks offer open space for exercise and socializing, for example people can jog, do yoga, or meet friends there.

提案: 回答很好，信息具体。可把句子稍微压缩并用连词衔接经历与感受，避免重复。若能加入时间或者具体活动细节会更好。

例: I would love to take a long walk in the snow-capped mountains around Lijiang in southwest China. I visited once before and remember being impressed by the spectacular views, crisp air, and peaceful atmosphere during a two-day hike.

提案: 减少填充词（umm），开头直接回答并用一两句具体细节支撑。可以说明时间、路线或感受，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: Lately I’ve been walking around my neighborhood. The nearby streets are lined with trees, so even short walks feel pleasant when I’m short on time.

× I like walk walking.

✓ I like walking.

句子中“like”后应接动名词（-ing形式）或不定式，但更常用动名词表达爱好。原句“walk walking”有重复和形式错误，应该改为“I like walking.”。建议记住动词 like 后常接动名词，如 I like swimming/reading。

× I work for 10 to 15 minutes every day in the morning or in the evening because I dislike A sedentary lifestyle and walking can help me, uh, stretch my body and clear my mind.

✓ I walk for 10 to 15 minutes every day in the morning or in the evening because I dislike a sedentary lifestyle, and walking can help me stretch my body and clear my mind.

原句中使用了“work”不符合语境，应使用“walk”。此外“A”应为小写“a”，句子也需要适当断句和去掉多余逗号。建议根据语境选择正确动词，并注意大小写与标点。

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child? Student: Not really, I didn't work a lot when I was a child but I did play games with my friends outside such as high and sick. I guess for kids walking is quite boring, they prefer more exciting games.

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child? Student: Not really. I didn't walk a lot when I was a child, but I did play games with my friends outside, such as hopscotch. I guess for kids walking was quite boring; they preferred more exciting games.

原文将“walk”错写为“work”，且“such as high and sick”是拼写和词汇错误，应为“hopscotch”。另外，叙述过去的习惯与感受时要用过去时态（walking -> was quite boring，prefer -> preferred）。建议注意动词拼写并在描述过去事件时一致使用过去时。

× walking in the park can help people escape from their stressful environment at workplace or school and secondly, parks off offer a space for exercise and socializing.

✓ Walking in the park can help people escape from their stressful environments at the workplace or school, and secondly, parks often offer a space for exercise and socializing.

原句中“environment”与“workplace”需用复数或加定冠词以匹配语境；“at workplace”应为“at the workplace”或“in the workplace”；“off offer”是拼写错误，应为“often offer”。建议注意介词搭配和常见拼写（often），以及名词单复数和定冠词的使用。

× I would like to take a walk to the snow capped mountains in Lijiang, which is located in the southwest of China.

✓ I would like to take a walk to the snow-capped mountains in Lijiang, which are located in the southwest of China.

“snow-capped”作复合形容词需连字符。句中“mountains”是复数，因此关系代词和动词应为“which are located”。建议注意复合形容词的连字符和主谓一致（复数名词用are）。

× Actually, I visited the mountains once before. I was impressed by the spectacular view and this crisp air and the peaceful environment.

✓ Actually, I visited the mountains once before. I was impressed by the spectacular view, the crisp air, and the peaceful environment.

原句中“this crisp air”与前后并列项格式不一致，且逗号缺失影响流畅。并列名词项应保持一致的定冠词或无冠词结构（the spectacular view, the crisp air, and the peaceful environment）。建议保持并列结构的一致性并使用适当标点。

× Where did you go for a walk lately? Student: Umm, these days I just walked around my neighborhood, umm, the streets downstairs are lined with trees and because I didn't have much time to go far, umm, but it was still pleasant.

✓ Where did you go for a walk lately? Student: Umm, these days I have just walked around my neighborhood. The streets downstairs are lined with trees, and because I didn't have much time to go far, it was still pleasant.

问题使用‘lately’通常与现在完成时连用（have just walked），但学生用过去时“walked”。建议用现在完成时表达最近发生的动作。此外原句逗号连接多个分句不当，应拆分成句子并去掉多余的连词“but”。注意时态一致和句子连接的逻辑。