Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid irrelevant time range (7:00 AM to 8:00 PM is unclear). Add one supporting detail using a linking word. Pronunciation pauses and filler words should be reduced.

例: Yes, I walk a lot, especially in the mornings. I usually start at 7:00 AM and walk for about 30–40 minutes because it helps me wake up. Also, sometimes I walk with my dog or meet friends, which makes the walk more enjoyable.

提案: Provide a complete and grammatically correct response with a clear time frame and specific detail. Avoid filler words ('uh') and finish your sentences. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I often walked with my father when I was a child. We usually went to the local park every weekend, and I remember we would feed the ducks and play on the swings after the walk.

提案: Give a clear reason with correct grammar and a supporting detail or example. Avoid hesitations and repeat words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

例: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the environment is quieter than on busy streets. For example, parks often have trees and grass, which makes walking more relaxing and healthier.

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific details about the rural area and use linking words to explain your preference.

例: I would like to take a long walk in the countryside because there are many beautiful views, such as rolling hills and fields. Also, the air is cleaner there, which would make the walk refreshing and peaceful.

提案: Answer with a clear, grammatical statement and give a specific detail such as location and purpose. Avoid sentence fragments and filler sounds. If mentioning steps, use a smooth phrase and link it to why it matters.

例: Recently I went for a walk along the roadside near my house and walked for about an hour. I usually do around 5,000 steps on these walks to stay active and clear my mind.

× Yes, I walk a lot, most especially in the morning.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot, especially in the morning.

Redundant phrase 'most especially' is awkward in standard English. Use 'especially' for emphasis. No tense change is needed; this is a wording/usage improvement within present tense.

× I usually start to walking at 7:00 AM.

✓ I usually start walking at 7:00 AM.

After 'start' use the base verb with -ing (start walking) or the infinitive (start to walk), not 'start to walking'. This is a verb form rule: use either 'start + -ing' or 'start + to infinitive' but not mixed.

× Up to 8:00 PM I'm with my friends.

✓ Until 8:00 PM I'm with my friends.

Use 'until' (or 'up until') to indicate time up to a point. 'Up to' can be used but needs context; 'until' is the correct preposition for indicating duration ending at a specific time. Present tense 'I'm' is fine.

× Sometimes I'm with my dog.

✓ Sometimes I'm with my dog.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change is needed. It correctly uses the present continuous to describe habitual present activity.

× Yes, uh, I usually walk everyday with my father.

✓ Yes, I usually walked every day with my father.

The question asks about childhood (past). The verb should be in past tense 'walked'. Also 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; use the adverb 'every day' to mean 'each day'.

× We walk going to the park and.

✓ We walked to the park.

The original mixes forms ('walk going to') and ends abruptly. For past habit, use 'walked to the park.' This is a structural simplification removing the incorrect 'going' and trailing conjunction.

× Usually do that in.

✓ We usually did that in the afternoons.

The fragment 'Usually do that in.' is incomplete. Provide the missing information and match past tense: 'We usually did that in the afternoons.' Specify a time period ('in the afternoons') for clarity.

× They like walking in the park because.

✓ They like walking in the park because it has more fresh air than the street and the office.

The original sentence is fragmented. Combine with the following clause to form a complete sentence. Ensure comparative structure 'more fresh air than' is followed by clear objects ('the street and the office'). Keep present tense because question is general.

× It, it has, uh, more fresh air than the in the street and.

✓ It has more fresh air than the street and the office.

Remove extraneous filler and incorrect article 'the' before 'in the street'. Use 'the street' or simply 'streets' consistently and complete the comparison by naming the other place. Also eliminate duplicated 'it, it'.

× I'd like to walk in the rural area because in the rural area there's many view beautiful view while walking and at the same time it has more fresh air than the.

✓ I'd like to walk in the rural area because there are many beautiful views while walking, and at the same time it has more fresh air than the city.

Use 'there are' with plural 'views' (there be issue). Word order 'many beautiful views' is correct. Added a comparison object ('the city') to complete 'more fresh air than the ...'. Also corrected word order 'beautiful views' and removed repetition. Maintained conditional 'I'd like' form.

× Uh, recently I went to the roadside.

✓ Recently I went to the roadside.

Remove filler 'Uh' in a written response. The past tense 'went' is correct for a recent event. No other grammatical changes needed.

× I walked there for an hour.

✓ I walked there for an hour.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense and needs no change.

× I used to. Walk 5000 step.

✓ I used to walk 5,000 steps.

Split sentence fragments into one complete sentence and use past habitual 'used to' with base verb 'walk'. Use plural 'steps' (singular/plural issue) and standard numeric formatting '5,000'. Combine fragments to avoid the period splice.