Walking— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you walk a lot?
受験者
I don't work a lot, but when I was a child I usually went to school by foot.
試験官
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, when I was a child I often went outside to have a walk. For example, I usually went to school by foot or sometime I went to my friend's house by foot.
試験官
Why do people like to walk in parks?
受験者
Let me see, I think people like to work in past because in past has a lot of trees. So this is a very, very fresh and sometime they they can they can see views and unwind.
試験官
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
受験者
I would like work on the pick picker. The big has beautiful views so I can walk in and unwind after I feel straight.
試験官
Where did you go for a walk lately?
受験者
Oh, I often with my friend go to the park to walk around the park.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you walk a lot?
スコア: 45.0提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi hiện tại. Tránh lỗi chính tả (work → walk) và dùng thì phù hợp. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ nếu cần. Ví dụ: nói rõ thói quen hiện tại và so sánh với quá khứ, dùng linking words (but, although, however).
例: I don't walk a lot these days because I usually commute by bus. However, when I was a child I often walked to school, which helped me stay active.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng lặp từ và có vài lỗi nhỏ. Nên dùng từ vựng tự nhiên hơn (on foot, sometimes) và rút gọn để tránh dư thừa. Dùng linking word như "for example" hợp lý, giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.
例: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. For example, I usually walked to school and sometimes went to my friend's house on foot, which gave me a lot of fresh air.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
スコア: 35.0提案: Cần sửa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (work → walk, past → parks). Tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý mạch lạc: nêu 1–2 lý do rõ ràng, dùng linking words (because, so, and) và ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng từ đúng: "fresh air", "relax/unwind", "scenery/views".
例: I think people like walking in parks because there are many trees and fresh air, so it feels relaxing. Also, parks offer pleasant scenery where people can unwind and enjoy nature.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
スコア: 20.0提案: Cần diễn đạt rõ nơi muốn đi và lý do bằng cấu trúc điều kiện giả định (If I had the chance...). Sửa lỗi từ (work → walk, pick picker unclear). Nên nêu địa điểm cụ thể (a hill, a coastal path, a national park), lý do rõ ràng và dùng linking word (because, so) để liên kết ý. Giữ dưới 5 câu.
例: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on a coastal path because the sea views are beautiful and the fresh air helps me relax.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn hoặc present perfect khi nói về gần đây (I went/I've been). Sửa trật tự từ (I often go with my friend) và tránh lặp từ "park". Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (what you did there) để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
例: Recently I went to the park with a friend to walk around the lake and chat. We usually go there to get some exercise and enjoy the fresh air.
文法
× I don't work a lot, but when I was a child I usually went to school by foot.
✓ I don't walk a lot, but when I was a child I usually went to school on foot.
The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' (wrong verb) and 'by foot' is not the usual prepositional phrase in English. Use 'walk' for moving on foot and the correct preposition is 'on foot'. Replace 'work' with 'walk' and 'by foot' with 'on foot'. Grammar problem type ID: 1
× Yes, when I was a child I often went outside to have a walk. For example, I usually went to school by foot or sometime I went to my friend's house by foot.
✓ Yes, when I was a child I often went outside for a walk. For example, I usually went to school on foot or sometimes I went to my friend's house on foot.
Use 'for a walk' rather than 'to have a walk' for natural English. 'By foot' is incorrect; use 'on foot'. Also 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. These are tense-compatible but involve idiomatic preposition and adverb form errors. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× Let me see, I think people like to work in past because in past has a lot of trees. So this is a very, very fresh and sometime they they can they can see views and unwind.
✓ Let me see, I think people like to walk in parks because in the past they had a lot of trees. So it was very, very fresh and sometimes they could see the views and unwind.
Multiple errors: 'work' should be 'walk' (wrong verb), 'in past' needs article and correct tense ('in the past' and past-tense verb 'had'), repetition 'they they can they can' must be reduced and modal tense adjusted to past context ('could'). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also 'this is' changed to 'it was' to match 'in the past'. These corrections address pronoun and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 12
× I would like work on the pick picker. The big has beautiful views so I can walk in and unwind after I feel straight.
✓ I would like to walk on the pier or promenade. The place has beautiful views so I can walk and unwind when I feel stressed.
Original has many lexical and preposition errors: 'would like work' needs 'would like to walk'; 'pick picker' is unclear—likely 'pier' or 'promenade'; 'walk in' is odd, simply 'walk'; 'after I feel straight' is incorrect idiom, should be 'when I feel stressed'. Use correct prepositions and collocations. Grammar problem type ID: 11
× Oh, I often with my friend go to the park to walk around the park.
✓ Oh, I often go to the park with my friend to walk around.
Word order is awkward: adverbial phrase 'with my friend' should follow the verb or be placed after the verb phrase: 'I often go to the park with my friend'. Also avoid repeating 'park' twice. This fixes sentence structure and redundancy. Grammar problem type ID: 26
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