Walking— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you walk a lot?
受験者
Yeah, I walk a lot and I'm walking in two time morning walk and evening walk and I always walk and enjoying nature and and clear atmosphere.
試験官
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
受験者
When I am child but then I walk in my near park with my grandmother and and I'm playing in the park and and doing more activities.
試験官
Why do people like to walk in parks?
受験者
Because park is very safe and clean. So then people walk in park and doing walking and captured some areas and see clarity and.
試験官
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
受験者
Yeah, actually I want like go to for long walk with my partner and enjoying atmosphere and enjoying natures and long time spent with my partner in long walk.
試験官
Where did you go for a walk lately?
受験者
I go for a walk recently in near my park and long and doing long walk and and relieve myself for Peace of Mind.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you walk a lot?
スコア: 58.0提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense, and limit to 2–3 supportive details. Use linking words like “usually” or “often” and correct collocations (e.g., “morning and evening”).
例: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a walk in the morning and again in the evening to enjoy the fresh air and the scenery.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
スコア: 55.0提案: Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words such as “when” or “and” sparingly and correctly. Mention specific activities to make the description vivid.
例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked to the nearby park with my grandmother, where I played on the swings and joined other children in games.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
スコア: 52.0提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons, connected with linking words like “because” and “also”. Avoid vague phrases and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., “parks are safe and well maintained,” “enjoy the scenery”).
例: People often walk in parks because they are safe and well maintained, and also because parks offer pleasant scenery and fresh air which helps people relax.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
スコア: 56.0提案: Give one clear location and two specific reasons. Use conditional phrasing correctly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “so that” to explain reasons.
例: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the coast with my partner because the sea breeze is refreshing and the scenery makes it a romantic, relaxing experience.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
スコア: 54.0提案: Use past tense for recent actions and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying where you went, then add specific details about duration and purpose using linking words like “to” or “so that”.
例: Recently, I went for a long walk in the park near my home to clear my mind and relax; I walked for about an hour and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
文法
× Yeah, I walk a lot and I'm walking in two time morning walk and evening walk and I always walk and enjoying nature and and clear atmosphere.
✓ Yeah, I walk a lot; I take two walks, a morning walk and an evening walk, and I always enjoy nature and the clear atmosphere.
The sentence incorrectly mixes simple present and present continuous ('I walk' and 'I'm walking') and misuses the verb + -ing form 'enjoying' without an auxiliary. Use consistent tense (simple present for habits) and the correct verb forms: 'take walks' and 'enjoy' (base form) for habitual actions. Also add articles for 'the clear atmosphere' and remove repetition.' '},{
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