Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不自然且有语法错误，句子含义模糊。应直接回答并用一个清晰的主句，然后补充简短原因。使用简单准确的词汇并保持一句或两句之内。

例: Not really. I don’t walk a lot because I usually commute by bike or public transport, but I try to walk short distances when the weather is nice.

提案: 内容诚实但表达重复且有语法与时态问题。应先直接回答，然后用一两个具体的细节说明原因，注意时态一致并用连词使句子连贯。

例: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went for walks because I preferred staying at home to play computer games with my friends, so we spent most afternoons indoors.

提案: 回答涵盖要点但有语法错误和用词不准，如单复数、介词与搭配。建议用一到两句，先给出原因，再用具体例子支持，并使用连接词。

例: People like walking in parks because it is relaxing and gives them fresh air. For example, friends can chat or do light exercise like jogging, and the green surroundings help reduce stress.

提案: 回答思路明确但句子组织和词汇需改进，存在大小写和搭配错误。应用一到两句说明地点并给出具体理由或细节，使用连词增强连贯性。

例: I would like to walk around the large lake near my school, which is about ten kilometers long, because the path is well-maintained and the scenery is peaceful, making it ideal for a long walk.

提案: 表达混乱且时态与词序错误较多，含糊且有停顿语填充。应用过去式直接回答，然后给出一到两个具体描述，避免语气词和犹豫。

例: Recently I went for a walk near my school. The area isn’t very large, but I enjoyed the pleasant scenery beside the lake and the quiet atmosphere.

× I don't walk always.

✓ I don't always walk.

该句中副词“always”放置位置不正确。英语中频率副词通常位于实义动词之前或be动词之后，但在否定句中（do not + 动词）应放在助动词do和主要动词之间或放在助动词之后。建议把“always”放在“don't”和“walk”之间。示例：I don't always walk.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

原句使用过去时疑问句时用法大体正确，但短语“have a walk”不如“go for a walk”地道。将“to have a walk”改为“for a walk”更自然。时态保持为一般过去时。建议多用固定搭配“go for a walk”。

× Not often, I think when I was a child. I'm very lazy and always intend to play computer games with my friends in my home.

✓ Not often, I think, when I was a child. I was very lazy and always intended to play computer games with my friends at home.

句子时态和介词使用错误。第一句作答关于过去，应保持过去时，因此“I'm very lazy”需改为过去时“I was very lazy”；意向动词“intend”在描述过去习惯应使用过去形式“intended”。介词“in my home”不自然，常用“at home”。此外需要调整标点和插入逗号使句子结构更清晰。建议把描述过去习惯的动词都用过去时，并用惯用介词短语“at home”。

× I think walking a park is a quite relaxing things in people's life.

✓ I think walking in a park is quite a relaxing thing in people's lives.

原句有多个问题：介词短语应为“walking in a park”而非“walking a park”；“a quite relaxing things”在数量和冠词上不匹配，应为“quite a relaxing thing”或“very relaxing”。此外“people's life”应使用复数“people's lives”表示多人的生活。建议注意介词搭配、单复数一致以及冠词位置。

× We can talk and play some exercise in the park and the environment is pretty good.

✓ We can talk and do some exercise in the park, and the environment is pretty good.

动词搭配错误，“play some exercise”不正确，应使用“do some exercise”或“exercise”。此外句子需用逗号连接并保持并列结构一致。建议记住固定搭配“do exercise”。

× I would like to walk around the lake. Near my school is a quite Big Lake and it's about 10 kilometers long.

✓ I would like to walk around the lake. Near my school there is a quite big lake and it's about 10 kilometers long.

原句“The Lake”大小写错误且冠词和句序问题。形容词“big”不应大写。句子“Near my school is a quite Big Lake”在英语中常用“Near my school there is a ...”结构。注意“quite big”而非“quite Big”。建议遵循句序和大小写规则。

× The road and the center is pretty good.

✓ The road and the center are pretty good.

主语由两个名词“the road and the center”构成，为复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。造成主谓一致错误。建议注意并列主语需用复数动词。

× I lately want to uh, like near in my school.

✓ Lately I have wanted to walk near my school.

“lately”通常放句首或与完成时连用以表示最近。原句“I lately want to”时态和搭配不自然，表示最近的经历用现在完成时更合适，因此改为“I have wanted”或“I recently wanted”。此外“like near in my school”结构混乱，应改为“walk near my school”或“near my school”。建议用正确时态并去掉多余填充词。

× It is not very large but I like the scenic well beside the lake.

✓ It is not very large but I like the scenery beside the lake.

“scenic well”不是正确词组，应使用名词“scenery”表示风景。“scenic”是形容词，若用作名词需用“scenic spot”或“scenery”。因此将“scenic well”改为“scenery”。句子其余部分语法正确。建议记住常用名词“scenery”及搭配“beside the lake”。