Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并使用正确时态与词汇，避免“work”误用来表示“walk”。可以用一至两句说明频率并补充简短原因。注意句子流畅与发音停顿。

例: Not really. I don't walk a lot — usually I only go for short walks with my parents after dinner because we're busy during the day.

提案: 需要用正确的过去时和词汇，把“work”换成“play”或“walk”。句子要更有条理，先给主题句再用一两句具体描述活动内容与频率，避免含糊和语法错误。

例: Yes, I often went outside to play with my friends after dinner when I was a child. We usually played simple games like tag or rode our bikes around the neighborhood.

提案: 答得比较直接，但要注意语法（主谓一致）和连词使用。可以先给原因句，然后用连接词补充具体影响或例子，使表达更自然连贯。

例: People like to walk in parks because the scenery is beautiful and the air is fresh. Also, walking in a green space helps them relax and reduce stress after a busy day.

提案: 使用虚拟语气和正确动词形式（If I had the chance / I would like to / I've never been）。句子要简洁并说明具体原因或期待的体验。

例: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on the Great Wall because the views are famous and I have never been there. I imagine it would be both challenging and rewarding.

提案: 回答要用正确过去时或现在完成时，明确地点和活动。不要把“work”与“walk”混淆，说明最近一次散步的地点、时间和所做的事情。

例: Lately I went for a short walk with my mother downstairs near our building. We chatted about our day and enjoyed the fresh air.

× MMM I think it's not very much. I just work with my parents after dinner.

✓ MMM I don't walk very much. I just walk with my parents after dinner.

句子中描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时。原句使用“it's not very much”不恰当，且动词“work”与“散步”意思不符，应使用动词“walk”。建议将表否定习惯改为“don't walk”，并用“walk with my parents”表示与父母一起散步。

× Yes, when I was a kid I really like work with my friends after dinner.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I really liked walking with my friends after dinner.

此句描述过去的习惯，应使用一般过去时。原句用现在时“like”和不定式“work”都不合适。将“like”改为过去式“liked”，并把“work with my friends”改为表示散步的短语“walking with my friends”。

× Umm are they tie we just doing some little games in work time.

✓ Umm sometimes we just played little games during our walks.

原句结构混乱，含有不合逻辑的词（如“are they tie”）且时态不对。根据语境应表达“有时我们在散步时玩一些小游戏”，使用过去时“played”（与前句“when I was a kid”一致）以及介词“during our walks”来表示时间。建议学习如何用副词表示频率（sometimes）和使用正确的时间介词。

× I think it's the scenery is very beautiful and the air are fresh in the park.

✓ I think the scenery is very beautiful and the air is fresh in the park.

句子中重复使用“it”和“the scenery”导致冗余，应去掉“it's”。“air”是不可数名词，谓语动词要用单数形式“is”而不是“are”。建议注意主语与系动词的一致性，以及避免重复主语。

× People need to relax their mind.

✓ People need to relax their minds.

英语中常用复数形式“minds”表示每个人的心情或思想。原句用单数“mind”不符合习惯用法。建议把可数表示的身体或心理部位按语境用复数形式。

× If I have a chance, I want to go the Great Wall to get a long walk because I think there is a famous landscape but I have never been go there.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go to the Great Wall for a long walk because I think the scenery is famous, but I have never been there.

这是与假设相反事实的条件句，应使用虚拟语气：条件从句用过去式（If I had），主句用would/would like表示愿望。另外“go the Great Wall”缺少介词“to”，“get a long walk”表达不自然，应为“for a long walk”。“there is a famous landscape”表达也不地道，改为“the scenery is famous”。“have never been go there”包含重复动词，应为“have never been there”。建议学习虚拟条件句结构（If + past, would ...）和固定短语用法（go to, been there, for a walk）。

× Recently I just work with my mother in downstairs at at home we just do some chat and work.

✓ Recently I just worked with my mother downstairs at home; we just chatted and did some chores.

“Recently”常与现在完成时或过去时连用，原句用现在时“work”不自然；根据语境使用过去式“worked”。“in downstairs at at home”词序和重复错误，应为“downstairs at home”。“we just do some chat and work”中“do some chat”不地道，改为“chatted”，而“work”作为名词不明确，改为“did some chores”表示做家务。建议注意时间副词与时态的一致、正确的词序以及使用自然的搭配（collocations）。