Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够直接和自然，句子有语法错误，信息重复且缺乏具体细节。建议首先直接回答（Yes/No），接着用一到两句简短具体说明原因或频率，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

例: Not really. I usually only walk when I go to work or school, since I prefer to take public transport for longer journeys. I don’t walk much in my free time because I often feel too tired.

提案: 回答包含正面信息但有多个语法和连贯性问题。建议使用正确的过去时，给出具体原因并用连接词（because/so）完整表达，并避免碎片句。

例: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child because our family didn’t have a car, so walking was the easiest way to get around. I also enjoyed exploring the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 回答不切题且表达混乱。应直接回答原因，使用清晰的句子并举例支持（例如放松、运动、社交），用连接词使逻辑连贯。注意用词准确（e.g. relax, socialize）。

例: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and escape from daily stress. They can also exercise, enjoy nature, or meet friends, which makes a park a pleasant place to spend time.

提案: 回答消极且含糊，语法和词汇使用有问题。建议先正面回答（给出地点），即使不想也可说明理由并提供替代选择，句子不超过五句，避免填充词。

例: I probably wouldn’t choose a long hike because I’m not very fond of strenuous exercise. If I had to, I would prefer a gentle coastal walk where I can enjoy scenery without too much effort.

提案: 回答没有直接回应“最近去哪儿散步”，而是说自己没去。建议先直接说“No, I haven't,”然后简要说明原因并提供最近一次散步的具体时间和地点或计划。注意语法和时态。

例: I haven’t been for a walk recently because the weather has been very hot, so I’ve stayed home to work. The last walk I took was a couple of weeks ago around the park near my house.

× No, I just go to work or go to school. I work and other time I didn't work because I am lazy.

✓ No, I just go to work or go to school. I work, and other times I don't work because I am lazy.

句子中时态和主谓一致有问题。“other time” 应为复数“other times”；第二句应使用现在时“don't work”以与前文的现在习惯动作一致；并加逗号连接并列分句，使句子更通顺。建议将动词保持在现在时，表习惯动作。

× Yes, when I'm I was young, I often go out to have a walk because. There is no faster travel and I just go walk to.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I often went out for a walk because there was no faster way to travel and I just walked.

句中涉及过去的习惯动作，应使用一般过去时：'was'、'went'、'walked'。原句还包含多余或错误的词序与短语（例如 'I'm I was'、'go out to have a walk'、'go walk to'），应简化为常用表达 'went out for a walk' 和 'there was no faster way to travel'。建议把描述过去的动作统一用过去时并使用自然搭配。

× I think go to work in parks is relaxing myself away and go to work can communicate with somebody or to relaxing yourself that is a way to relax.

✓ I think walking in parks is relaxing, and you can meet someone and relax there; it's a way to unwind.

原句中代词和动词形式混乱：'relaxing myself away' 和 'to relaxing yourself' 用法不当且人称不一致。应统一使用一般表达并保持人称一致（如使用 'you' 或 'people'）；同时将不定式或动名词换为正确形式，如 'walking'。建议用自然的短语 'walking in parks is relaxing' 和 'you can meet someone' 来表达。

× No, I think I will refuse this, uh, chance because, uh, I didn't like sport and I like stay at home and I don't want to go along work.

✓ No, I think I will refuse this chance because I don't like sports; I like staying at home and I don't want to go for a walk.

句子时态和动词形式混用：表示将来意向可用 'will refuse'，但后文描述喜好应使用现在时 'don't like'；'didn't like' 不符合语境。'like stay at home' 应改为动名词 'like staying at home'；'go along work' 是错误搭配，应为 'go for a walk'。建议统一时态，使用正确的词组表达。

× Oh I recently in not work go out because weather is very hot and I didn't like to go outside. I just stay at home to work.

✓ Oh, I haven't gone out recently because the weather is very hot and I don't like going outside. I just stay at home to work.

句中时间状语 'recently' 常与现在完成时连用，应使用 'haven't gone out recently'；'I didn't like to go outside' 应与当前状态一致改为现在时 'I don't like going outside'；'stay at home to work' 可保留，但要注意动名词形式和时态一致。建议使用现在完成时表达最近的经历，并将喜欢/不喜欢用现在时。